Chromatic Agape
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, Linux, and Android
Those who wail in the depths of despair, what do they share in common?
Sev (MC), a soon-to-be medical graduate, takes a nostalgic plunge into the product of their childhood hobby — a painting filled with heroes and villains. Yet, they’re unexpectedly drawn into the world of their canvas as they do so.
Confronted by multiple pixies —a dastardly “villain” and six colorful “heroes,” who revere their creator as a god-like figure— will Sev be able to discover the creations’ true intentions…?
The current demo contains the complete prologue. Individual character routes will be released at a future date.
Sev - The Creator (Customizable)
"Maybe I should finish your drawing so they can’t ignore you anymore..."
Shyloh - Villain of Gluttony
"Give me the courage to go to lengths no hero would ever go."
An enigmatic half-sketched character from the painting. He yearns for completion to embrace his destiny as a true antagonist and forever stay by the side of his creator. His love reaches the pinnacle of nobility and unconditional devotion.
Yulen - Hero of Wrath
"If you keep acting coy like that, I'll just have to eat you up."
A fiery character, who risks it all to protect his comrades and keep them out of harm's way. His love is fueled by intense obsession and possessiveness.
Helios - Hero of Greed
"It means we like you, and since we like you, we want to bestow our assistance upon you."
An intelligent character, who employs his knowledge to navigate tough situations and remain composed for the sake of his team. His concept of love focuses on self-care and appreciation for one's partner.
Merka - Hero of Envy
"I’d rather sew my mouth shut forever than admit this cursed feeling of mine."
A caring character, who showcases his generosity and readily embraces self-love, often looking after everyone's well-being. His love is founded on friendship, goodwill, and mutual respect.
Kai - Hero of Sloth
"Even if this world seems spoiled and foul, living in this life is far better than whatever uncertainties death holds."
A diligent character, who exerts his leadership and skillfully negotiates the best outcomes for his team. His love is grounded in practicality, compatibility, and compromise.
Adonis - Hero of Pride
"I'll make it fun for the both of us..."
A grandiose character, who expresses his appreciation and praise for the team's efforts, validating everyone's contributions. His love is rooted in playfulness and fun.
Rosario - Hero of Lust
"Would it really be the worst thing to get seduced by me?"
A kind-hearted character, who spreads love and acceptance to everyone, drawing people close with his innate charm. His love is driven by sexual attraction, passion, and desire.
Character Customization
Choose your Main Character’s name and pronouns (She, He, or They). Select from the diverse customization options, such as multiple skin tones, physical builds, genital selection, preferences for NSFW scenes (dominant & submissive roles), front & back hairstyle variations, and accessory inclusion.
TW Preference List
Choose from a list of trigger warnings to block specific images or text in scenes. You can also access an additional trigger warning list in the menu options (spoilers are involved for unreleased routes, so proceed with caution).
Gameplay
Replay the game to immerse yourself further in the enchanting world of pixies, and embark on various paths within the story. Your decisions shape the narrative, either leading it toward a dark romance or a plunge into a gruesome end.
- 7 main character sprites each with 10+ variations.
- 25+ CG illustrations (not including variations).
- 10+ background artworks.
- Assorted visual effects (VFX) and miscellaneous effects.
- Inclusion of a Gallery to showcase unlocked content.
- A collection of 25+ tracks accompanied by engaging sound effects and ambient sounds to enrich the player experience.
- Over 60,000 words of content with over 20 possible endings. and multiple interconnected routes.
Please note that some of the factors mentioned above are intended for our future full release. While certain elements are currently available in our demo, others will be included at a later date.
CHROMATIC AGAPE contains mature themes and is intended for an older audience. Player discretion is advised. The team is not responsible for the player's ability to moderate.
Specific warnings for the full release of the game include but are not limited to:
Obsessive Behavior, Strong Language, Child Abuse, Kidnapping, Confinement, Consensual Sexual Content, Sexual Coercion (No Rape), Nonconsensual Sexual Content, Nudity, Blood, Death, Murder, Stalking, Torture, Gore, Binding, Cannibalism, Dismemberment, Skin-stitching, Self-harm, Self-harm Ideation, Suicide, Suicidal Ideation, Insects, Arthropods, Mind Control, Hallucination, Manipulation, Gaslighting, Choking, Suffocation, Slavery.
Director & Producer
Writing
Writer: Deniz G. Lerosi
Editor & Proofreader: Bobbert, Chantal, Angelica, BellAh, Elizabeth
Art
Art Director: Dagmell
Sprite Art: Bobbert
Character Design: Dagmell, Bobbert, JellySquidling, crying
CG Art: Dagmell, JellySquidling, crying, zerotosiki, Sekkusu
Main Menu Art: Simplyhalina
Misc Art: Simplyhalina
Logo Art: Dagmell
Itch Page Design & Icon Art: Dagmell
Audio
Composers: Cormalva Music, Moximog, Bismii, KyootMofo
SFX Designer: Cormalva Music, Moximog, KyootMofo
Programming
Script: elduator
Assets: Bobbert, elduator, Elizabeth
ATL: Bobbert, elduator, Elizabeth
GUI: TsunamiJuria, elduator
Android Port: carlsonsantana
Resources Used
Caption Tool for Ren'Py from npckc
Ren'Py All-In-One GUI Template from Báiyù, Shaker originally by TheoMinute
In-Depth Pronouns for Ren'Py from Feniks
Special Thanks
Please note that there are still a few glitches in our system, and we're actively working to resolve them as soon as possible. If you encounter any issues, kindly fill out this FORM, and we will address them during the next update. We appreciate your patience and understanding. Thank you!
Download
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Development log
- Patch #1Jul 02, 2024
- Extended Demo Release!Jul 01, 2024
Comments
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Hii I’m curious about the structure of the pixies « domains ». On one side Im imaginating the domains as equally beautiful, something straight out of the haft paykar. But also it’s kinda hard imaginating someone like Yulen have a beautiful domain with flowers everywhere. And also i wonder how is it inside, interior design says a lot about someone (already planning escape plans). And does Shyloh even got a domain ? Or is he just constantly on the run so he cant settle somewhere
ALSO i love how we're able to customize our character, not many visual novels have that, amazing work! :))
Love love love ts game so much dude, shyloh is so cute bro
when will the full game come out? :3
Hi Shanyuerin! I’m aiming for a 2025 release, though I don’t have a set date yet— it depends on how the editing and programming process goes.
Also, if you could take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much (^‿^v)
Question about the routes. How will we choose ? Means do we choose directly after the demo (like how a lot of otome games work) or do we have to make particular dialogue choices in the common route to then get the specific route we want ?
Hey there, Hehe~ To answer your question, you'll unlock a character's route based on the points you earn in the common route. I decided not to have the player select directly because I feel like it would take away from the impact of the earlier choices. Plus, it adds a bit of extra dramaaaaa! XD
Yeaa I could have guessed that you would go towards the unlocking route. Im happy about that, means I’ll have to do extra thinking when making choices. I’ll do every single route and maybe endings anyways soooo I saw that the game had winx club as inspiration and OMGG my worlds are colliding ☠️ that show was a whole part of my childhood Im so curious about how you’ll incorporate the references
Oh-ma-gawwwd, yeeees I love the idea of making the player work a little harder to get to know the characters— it makes each choice feel way more meaningful! One fun twist I’m planning is to have certain characters respond in unexpected ways— so if you pick what seems like the "nice" or "correct" option (like helping them or being friendly), it might actually lead to their bad ending. You’ll need to understand each character’s mindset to get the best results~~
As for the Winx inspiration— yes! That’s exactly where the whole fairy/pixie idea came from ^^ I feel like that show was such a big part of our childhoods. I even got the name 'Helios' from 'Helia' in the show, since he was one of my favorites (though his personality is totally different here, haha XDD). I had to separate them to keep things fresh!
By certain characters I have a little feeling that a certain redheaded leather jacket wearer will definitely not mind at all if the player picks the mean options. But for the other characters yeaa ill have to work hard to determine which type of response they prefer (although I already have my ideas …) and that makes the whole game even better By the way, again for the routes, we got 2 bad endings and 1 good end. Will the full story progress only from the good ending or also the bad endings ? Idk if I worded it well
I'm staying quiet for now, but the redheaded leather jacket wearer does have a thing or two for when you resist him~ Just be careful not to push his buttons too much XD Also, I gotta admit, I’m not quite sure what you meant by the comment about the endings/story progression. Could you clarify?
On the same note, the endings for certain characters might change depending on how the editing goes! For example, one character could have 1 bad, 1 neutral, and 1 good ending, or maybe just 2 bad and 1 neutral— it's still a bit up in the air (cause some of them, based on their routes, don't deserve a good ending ngl). But hey, everyone’s guaranteed to have at least one bad ending LOL equality at its finest.
Hii! I really reallyy enjoyed the demo. Every aspect of it was intriguing and always kept me interested with twists^^ I played through it about five times? I was wondering how many endings there are currently to make sure I got them all. Goodluck on finishing it!!
Hi there Val! Thank you so much for playing the demo (five times, WOWOW!) and for sharing such kind words—it means a lot to hear you enjoyed it and were hooked by all the twists! ^^
Super curious to know which characters are your faves btw <33
Currently, there are two bad endings for Sev. There's also the end of the demo where Shyloh saves you (this one isn't a game ending, just the end of the demo).
Also, if you could take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much (^‿^v)
You're so welcome^^ so far Helios would have to be my fav I'm always a big fan of angelic looking characters!! Although Shyloh is growing on me also. Thanks for clearing it up for me:3 I will definitely rate it right now!
Oh wow, that was such a quick response—also thank you for the fabulous rating, Val! <33 I’m so happy to meet another Helios fan! Honestly, he’s such a beloved character for me too, so we reallyyyy went all out with his motifs (and the pompous way of speaking LOL) ^^ His route is one of my absolute favorites, so I hope you get to it as much as I do XD
As for Shyloh, gotta admit I'm biased towards him the most, so it’s awesome to hear he’s growing on you too! (Especially since he got the highest CG count FJHSFFJGSJGFSJG)
This is so interesting. Looking forward to the full release!
Aww, thank you! I’m really glad to hear you enjoyed our game and took the time to leave a comment. We hope the full version meets your expectations too! ^^
If you could also take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much <3
Hii I remember seeing somewhere in the comments that you would maybe add some voice acting as a stretch goal (or maybe I’m having false memories ☠️). I wonder if you have voice claims for the characters or just an idea about how they would sound like. It’s fun imaginating how voiceless characters may sound from their personality, designs etc
I can’t remember if I’ve mentioned adding VO in comments before, but just to clarify, I don’t think I’ll be including them. I had a negative experience with a VO director on my first project, which led to me handling everything on my own and caused a lot of stress T~T So, unless a team member really persuades me, I’m likely going to skip VO!
As for their voices (cue long rant)~
Shyloh: I imagine him with a deep yet mild voice. He speaks gently to Sev, but when addressing the other pixies, his tone shifts to a gritty growl, revealing his more aggressive side. There’s a hint of despair in his voice, as if he’s on the verge of fading away. Years of begging and praying have taken their toll on him.
Yulen: He’s the lighthearted jokester, so I picture him with an airy, loud tone (maybe even a hint of a drawl-like accent.) His exaggerated expressions and animated hand movements would make his voice really pop.
Helios: He’d have a formal tone, clearly enunciating his words since he never uses contractions (like saying "I am" instead of "I’m"). His voice would be mid-range but would drop deeper when he gets serious, adding an element of intimidation.
Merka: As the annoying brat of the group, he’d have a loud, shrill voice, always bubbling with frustration. His erratic body language matches his tone, and while he’s a master of camouflage and can mimic others, he intentionally refrains from doing so around fellow pixies to ensure he stands out.
Kai: He’d be the quietest, with a deep, melancholic voice that feels soothing, almost like a lullaby. His speech would be slow and calming (ideal for ASMR LOL), though sometimes his voice might get muffled under his veil, requiring listeners to strain to catch his words.
Adonis: He’d likely have an airy accent, contrasting with his rugged appearance. Years of smoking have affected his vocal cords after all. He uses a stern tone to assert his authority, but for added drama, he might lean in close and whisper “good [girl/boy/kid]” in your ear to gauge your reaction.
Rosario: He’d have a melodic accent, stretching his words to make them sound sweeter and more inviting. His sentences would have an ascending or cascading intonation, designed to capture attention and linger in memory. He’d coo softly, ensuring his voice resonates with those he speaks to.
That’s clearly how I see their voices (although in my head I can’t help but imagine Adonis’ vocal cords to be completely fried because of all this smoking. Literally coughing and wheezing every second ☠️ funny thoughts to get through all the violence) Rosario’s voice would be rather high, mid or deep tho ?
I can't imagine Adonis coughing/wheezing (but that would be a hilarious twist XD) I'd like to imagine his voice having that rough edge, hinting at vocal cord damage, but it gives off a seasoned vibe instead of sounding sickly (hopefully that makes sense LOL.)
As for Rosario, he really has a gift for adjusting his voice to match the moment— not in a camouflage-like way as with Merka, but more about connecting with others and meeting their emotional needs because he wants to love and be loved. When he’s looking to inspire, that mid-high ascending melody is perfect for uplifting his listener. On the other hand, when he needs to be more critical, a descending tone from high-mid adds a nice touch of disappointment. And during flirtatious or NSFW moments, his sultry mid-deep voice brings a warm intimacy while still keeping that sweet melodic quality~~
Yess so Adonis is your average middle aged guy but with extra steps and a magic pipe And as I expected, Rosario is the definition of a siren lmao. No wonder Merka, in the demo, really seemed to calm down from his usual tantrums every time Rosario got a little serious with him
Hiii is there a reason why all the pixies are smiling and closing their eyes except Merka who’s closing his mouth, Kai who’s opening his eyes and Rosario who’s closing his mouth ?
What’s the meaning and inspo behind the wings ?
And idk if I’m reaching here but is there some haft paykar inspo in the story ? I mean, it’s through a painting that we know about the pixies. They are seven, color coded, each represent different concepts and the protagonist’s meeting with them brings spiritual change. Lots of similarities
One of my favorite players is back, and I couldn’t be happier! <33
As for your first question, that’s a tough one! Depending on how the edits turn out, it could end up being a hidden gem that people discover later, or it might stay subtle and fly under the radar. It’s really up in the air ;;
Now, about the wings and their meanings: in general, they’re a symbol of each character’s freedom and their ability to act on their desires. But there are exceptions! For example, Shyloh’s wings are designed to look “weighed down,” showing the limitations and challenges that hold him back. This theme will be explored more during his route. Sev, on the other hand, doesn’t have wings at all, which is an even stronger statement. It represents a complete lack of freedom and makes her a symbol of feeling trapped.
Each character’s wings tell their own story too~ For example, Yulen, the Hero of Wrath, has Goliathus Beetle wings to show his strength and resilience. There’s a unique winged creature behind each pixie’s wings, so it’s definitely something fun to look into if you’re interested!
Also, FJHSGJFGSJSGJ I GENUINLY CANNOT BELIEVE YOU GOT THE REF WITH HAFT PEYKAR. That's a scary level of attention to detail and research, I legit have goosebumps and I absolutely love it—even the team didn’t spot that one, so huge kudos to you Hehe!! It was an epic that inspired me during the drafting phase since, at that time, I was also researching the 7 stages of love from Sufi traditions, which inspired some of Nizami’s work (though, I eventually decided to go with the Eastern Monastic Tradition, the precursor to the Western concept of the seven deadly sins which includes the "Eight Thoughts," as outlined by Evagrius Ponticus and later discussed in the Philokalia.)
Fun fact (and do excuse me if I’ve mentioned this before lol): Sev’s name actually ties into one of the seven stages of love from Sufi tradition.
I am definitely excited to see what’s behind the meaning of the different pixies depiction. When I first played the demo it stuck out to me I am not a winged creature expert but I’m still gonna do research about each pixies wings. There’s always new things that we must learn about. We hope Sev will learn to fly by themselve About the Haft Paykar I am sadly not rlly knowledgeable about Persian literature, I’m more of an Arabic literature nerd. I didn’t pick up the reference right away. I was looking at Qajar era paintings and thought there would definitely be some pixies that could rock these fits and then suddenly the dots connected in my head and here came the associations with Haft Paykar ☠️ And I can assume that the pixies domains are like the princesses pavilions That aside Im so glad I could find a game that uses other religions and mythologies than Christianity and Greco-roman mythologies. And since I’m also from the SWANA region I’m extra glad to see Islamic references and concepts from our region. I had some doubts that you used the precursor of the seven sins instead of the recent version because of Kai. I think he’s a little far from the modern depictions of sloth and is closer to Acedia or melancholy. In fact I didn’t know there was 7 stages of love, I only know about the Arabic version who got more than 7 stages. To which stage Sev corresponds to ? And since you scrapped the 7 stages of love concept for the pixie, which stage is attributed to which pixie ?
Exactly! I’ve played so many games rooted in Christian and Greco-Roman themes that they started feeling a bit repetitive after a while. But I get why developers stick to familiar territory; introducing too many new themes all at once can be overwhelming. That’s why I chose a mix of influences for the game. I grew up surrounded by religious ideas, though I’m not as connected to them now. This inspired me to blend a variety of elements—everything and nothing all at once—so that it stays rooted in the world of the painting while hinting at different aspects of various religions.
SWANA literature often doesn’t get the attention it deserves, especially in English translations, where much of the poetic beauty can be lost. That makes it harder to weave into mainstream media, but I’m hoping the pixies will help bridge that gap! XD
To answer your next question, here’s a bit of background: there are the 'Eight Thoughts' (which were precursors to St. Gregory the Great's seven deadly sins). They include 1. Avarice, 2. Gluttony, 3. Lust, 4. Sloth, 5. Despair, 6. Anger, 7. Vainglory, and 8. Pride. The traditional seven deadly sins are: 1. Lust, 2. Gluttony, 3. Greed, 4. Sloth, 5. Wrath, 6. Envy, and 7. Pride. You’ll notice that ‘Despair’ is the extra one here, which I wanted to tie to Sev—this is also known as ‘Naomidi,’ as Kai calls it.
According to the Catechism of the Catholic Church (1992), sloth is described as a “culpable lack of physical or spiritual effort,” which connects to Kais' future route (hence the confusion from the demo). Think of it this way: his melancholy is more of a symptom than the root cause.
As for the seven stages of love, we have: 1. Dilkashi (attraction), 2. Uns (attachment), 3. Ishq (love), 4. Akidat (trust/reverence), 5. Ibadat (worship), 6. Junoon (madness), and 7. Maut (death). Can you guess which one Sev represents? Hint: her name is the Turkish verb for one of these stages!
Annnnd for your final question, I actually never fully linked the stages to the characters since they were developed after the game’s philosophy was set. But it’s something fun to think about for when the game is released! (This reminds me of when a friend once asked me how I’d imagine the characters in an omegaverse world, I have an entire list + analysis for that FSHGFJHSGJFSH).
Omgg I’m so excited for what you have in store for us. I’ll definitely also think about what stage corresponds to each pixie.
I just noticed something concerning Rosario again. In the bad ending 1, before sexually assaulting the mc his eyes glow pink. And the mc was very passive, didn’t even move an inch, didn’t even speak etc. I wonder if it’s because either freezing is Sev’s trauma response or maybe Rosario have the power to paralyze them somehow ?
Aww, thank yoooou <33 I really hope it lives up to expectations! ^^
About Bad Ending 1 and Rosario, there’s actually a simple reason behind it. The eye glow is part of his 'yandere' expression (each pixie has their own unique one), hence the change before he did the deed. And as for your comment about the powers: each pixie only has a single power, so for Rosario, that’s shape-shifting (he can’t have everything, haha! XD).
For Sev's response, I felt the freezing fit the scene better since she lost the will to fight after half-blinding Adonis but still couldn’t get away. Also, in case anyone was self-inserting as the MC, the scene wouldn't get too uncomfortable (had they chosen to see the sexual scenes.)
Wait a secccc idk a thing about omegaverse but now I’m curious on how the characters would do in that type of setting (ofc ik you cant say a lot of things bc spoilers for the full release etc etc so just the surface level)
Soooo bascially, omegaverse (Alpha/Beta/Omega [ABO]) is a storytelling setting that's become super popular in mangas/manhwas lately. It features characters as omegas, betas, or alphas. There are also subcategories for the omega and alpha roles, like submissive and dominant, plus a "switch" option where characters can change their traits. My friend and I were chatting about an ABO visual novel that we both played, and that got me thinking about it, haha!
Now as to how they would do in the setting and which trait they'd have... that could be a major spoiler XD but I can safely say that Merka would definitely be a Beta! LOL
I'm so hooked on this game! When is the full game release? 😭
Heya Choco! So glad to hear you enjoyed our game <3
I can’t give you a specific date just yet since our script is still in the editing process, and I’m on the lookout for a new programmer since our previous one is no longer with the team. But the good news is that all our assets in the art and music departments are nearly complete!
Fingers crossed, we can aim for 2025 ^^
Hey, that’s awesome to hear! I’m really looking forward to play the full release! Hope the search for a new programmer goes smoothly. ദ്ദി(ᵔᗜᵔ)
Yea every time I play the demo there’s always some questions popping up. But this one is kinda trivial. What are the heights of the pixies ? (I need to prove to a friend that Merka is not shorter than me)
Of course, I'm always happy to answer questions from you Hehe ^^
From shortest to tallest, the order is:
The line (in the demo) about Sev being a similar height to Merka is a little hint for something coming up in his route!
Fun fact: I was this close to making Shyloh even taller (can you tell I’m biased? XD), but his hair would’ve been flying out of frame like crazy, so I had to let that dream go T~T
Omg thank you. Good to know my frequent interventions are appreciated. Merka rlly gives short vibes (esp next to Rosario) and I thought he would be something like 165 cm. But then you say Sev and Merka being the same height is important to the story ? Im already scared ☠️☠️☠️
So a few more questions
Will there be more customizations (on behalf of the same friend with no itch.io account) ? If there is I would like to propose something like the darkest skintone already disponible but with a warmer undertone. And maybe also some plus sized options
How does Rosario’s genitals work ? Bc I cant help but imagine something like the caduceus with the two snakes coiling (Omgg medical reference)
Absolutely! I’m thrilled when people like you dive into the characters with such great questions—it honestly makes my day. You've definitely become one of my favorite commenters/players!
About Merka: the reason he might come across as shorter than his actual height has a lot to do with the dynamics around him. Yulen calls him "green runt," and since Merka and Rosario—one of the taller characters—are always together, that contrast really stands out (and maybe Yulen’s hiding his own height complex, given how much he loves boasting about being the strongest and fastest!). And then there’s Adonis, who keeps calling him a child—no wonder they're all testing his patience LOL
Helios may just be the only one by his side...
On the customization front, it's a bit of a mixed bag. We initially planned for more options—like makeup, hairstyles, and additional eye and hair colors—but some of our artists have moved on to new projects. So, while I can’t make promises, I’ll definitely share your ideas with the team!
As for Rosario, this is going to count as a bit of a spoiler:
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Rosario has hemipenes! With two options, you can imagine how things might play out depending on the character’s sex choice from the initial customization. And who knows? Maybe there's been a hidden caduceus reference from the start, given that he’s the only character with an animal motif… ^^
Thank youu and yup, the characters are all worth diving into
Concerning Merka and Yulen, so their insecurities might be why (by what I see by the prologue and the individual tws) they are the most violent of the bunch physically. I mean they all are in their own way but Yulen is giving punches left and right and Merka is always spewing insults. They are definitely compensating for something
I’m sorry to hear that some of the staff have moved on and I hope the project is going smoothly for everyone
And about Rosario, I knew he had hemipenes but since the description in the bad ending mentionned them coiling then I was confuse whether they would be like, parallel or around each other. Since the caduceus reference is confirmed then ig they rlly are around each other.
Also concerning for the genitals option for the mc. Would there be like, hole preference for lack of better terms ? Like if we choose Sev to have female genitals can we choose to not do anal or something like that ?
Absolutely! Merka’s insecurities are a big part of his route, especially since his love theme centers on philia, and he’s the hero associated with envy. For example, you can see the 'hero' thematics play out in his interactions with Rosario, where they show off their wings. Additionally, his height complex can make him get pretty fussy + when others treat him like a brat—which fits right in with philia’s need for friendship or brotherly love.
Yulen, on the other hand, is much more direct. His love theme of mania drives him to pursue what he wants with an intense focus, which can make him a little extreme, especially as the hero of wrath. Unlike Shyloh’s clinginess, Yulen’s approach is about total commitment—mind, body, and soul. And when it comes to things beyond his control, like height, he might use others (like Merka) as a teasing point to feel just a touch superior/competitive. (Could the pixie's height hint at something deeper? Just a clue for you!)
Are they the most violent of all? Hmmm... I can think of two possible characters who maaaay be more intense but... that would be super spoiler territory LOL
On the production side, life can definitely throw a few unexpected twists our way, but we’re in good shape! Most art/music assets are ready, and now we’re focused on script edits and programming.
And for Rosario, as the hero of lust, his shapeshifting ability allows his anatomy to switch between coiling and standing parallel (hemipenes are still there XD). In the bad ending, we went with the coiling option to keep things simple. For those choosing female or intersex anatomy, there will also be a prompt during said NSFW scenes to select options like anal or vaginal, so players can tailor the experience!
I'm so happy I decided to check the 2024 Otome Jam submissions, this game is so beautiful and so interesting!
Thank you so much for your kind comment (the profile name checks out as well <3) It means a lot to us to have you check out our submission and that you enjoyed our game ^^
If you could also take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much!
normally i do not write comments but i really enjoyed your demo. hopefully it comes out soon
Hello, Deniz! My name is Sonsoles, I'm an English to Spanish (Spain) translator. I love playing otome games and after playing Chromatic Agape's demo, I'm fascinated with its aesthetic, mechanics (I love that you can select TWs) and narrative. I'd really love to translate your game if that's something you're interested in!
There are two examples of my Itchio translations on my profile, but my contact email is sonsolesmendezalv@gmail.com, if you have any questions!
All these men are so pretty even my sweet little moth (My fav) but surrounded by all of them I just think of that meme of ralph on the bus from the Simpsons " I'm in danger" XD
I want REVENGE!
Quick question, where does the name Merka comes from ? Yulen too
Heya there! So happy you're curious about their names ~ Time to drop some lore (and who doesn't love that for their characters? (≧◡≦) ♡)
The name "Merka" has a Turkic origin with some adjustments— It comes from the word "Merak," which means curiosity (something that pops up in his future route and was even hinted in the demo as to how he knew certain things about Sev) and desire (a little nod to his situationship with Rosario). It's also an anagram for 'Maker' (maybe related to his route... no spoilers though!)
As for "Yulen," he's actually an OC from a scrapped story idea (ah, the Wattpad era mafia stories XD). With a bit of tweaking, 'Yul' comes from 'Yulian,' which means youthful—hinting that he may or may not be the first one born in the painting (Adonis always loves to argue about that (¬‿¬). It also nods to the Turkic word "Yalan," which means lie, since Yulen insists he always tells the truth and nothing but the truth (or does he...?) I originally wanted to combine the two as 'Yul-lan,' but kept hearing 'Mulan' in my head for some reason, so I had to adjust it LOL
Bonus fun fact! I was actually considering naming him "Yalan," but I realized people might pronounce it as 'YAY-len' instead of 'YUH-lun,' so I scrapped that idea real quick XDD
knk türk müsün <:o)
ohh seems like I’ll have to know better about Turkic languages to have a better understanding of the game (totally understanding the bit about mispronouncing names esp from English speakers lmao it can be kinda annoying)
The main focus of the game is actually on Persian elements more than Turkic ones. I mostly used Turkic inspiration for naming things (like Sev, Merka, Yulen), but the lore itself—like the Ehsas and their subtypes—is more Persian-focused. A lot of those elements are also common in Urdu too. The love types are rooted in Greek mythology, so there's a lot going on! ^^ It was definitely a challenge to balance all of them, haha XD But don’t worry—you won’t miss out on any game content if you’re not familiar with these languages. They’re more like fun easter eggs or little hints!
Oh my goodness gracious, I can't wait for this to come out. I get the feeling that I'm going to be starved for more if I play it right now, but I'm definitely saving it for later!! The art is gorgeous, the character designs look great, and it's obvious that a lot of hard work has gone into this game so far :)
I AM SAT DOWN SIR. I'M KEEPING AN EYE ON THIS ONE. ADONIS??? HELLO??? ZADDY??? HE SURE IS SHAPED LIKE AN ADONIS GOOD LORD I'M LICKING THE SCREEN
Since my dumbass finally found the individual tws, I’m kinda surprised at the lack of Helios TWS. Here I assumed he would be the worst ☠️. Ig sometimes my intuition is wrong, but then I was right in saying Shyloh and Kai are more red flaggy than what they want the player to believe
Oh my gosh, you’re making it really difficult for me not to spoil anything! I can offer a little hint to satisfy your curiosity though~ (I still don't know how to use the spoiler tag in Itch comment XD)
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Since these two were your favorite characters:
Helios has eyes and ears everywhere—who knows, he might just drop in on another character’s route... as for Rosario, his flirty charm is quite the power when you consider how he can collect Ehsas from other pixies ^^
aaah I really love this. I am genuinely suprised that Helios' content warnings doesnt have gaslighting at high, he definitely feels like the kind of guy to be incredibly manipulative and gaslight you xD that post "confrontation" talk made me so angry at him, especially with how he treated Kai. I really like them all so far and want to see how they all play into their sin.
In the full game will the choices you make during the prologue influence whose route you end up on? I can already see that in each "path" you can side/interact with 1 of the heroes more than the other. It'd be pretty cool if it did influence the route you get.
Ahhh, I’m so glad you love how I grasp the pixie personas (✿◠‿◠) Depending on the editing process, the TW tags might get a little tweak, but the core of each route is solid since they were confirmed during the story outline and the art/music distribution. If you’re curious, I can share a tiny hint I wrote for another comment!
As for the prologue choice, yes! Every choice in the demo is meant to build points with the pixies. That’s why I didn’t include an option to leave with Shyloh—I really wanted players to build points with the pixies! Everything is being calculated~
I’m also planning to add a few illusionary choices in the full release since some players were really excited about that, even if they don’t directly affect the routes and only lead to dialogue variations. I initially left them out due to time constraints, but now that we have a bit more time, I’m excited to include them for everyone’s enjoyment ^^
Here's a little hint since I still haven't learned how to use Itch spoiler tags FJSHGFJSGFJFSG
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Since you were really curious about Helios' TWs:
He has eyes and ears everywhere—who knows, he might just drop in on another character’s route...
complete version when :"(( (i'll give you an arm and a leg (not mine) to finish it I NEED IT SO BAD ITS CRAZY)
I totally feel you, marrnie! I can’t wait to release the full version too T~T I can’t give you a specific date just yet since it’s still in the editing process, and I’m on the lookout for a new programmer since our previous one is no longer with the team. But the good news is that all our assets in the art and music departments are nearly complete!
Merka would definitely appreciate your kind offer—he needs the arm to grow into a proper pixie!
Please, can i have some more. Yelling I need it (spongebob voice)
Yaysiessss! I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed our game~ when the full release drops, we'll all be saying "goodbye everyone, I'll remember you all in therapy" (plankton voice, cause we have always have to side with the villains) XD
The demo was so peak I had to create an account just to leave my thoughts
First I rlly don’t think I’ve been that invested in an otome since like forever. I’m so serious, the plot is soo interesting there’s something out there that draws me in. First I think the mc is fairly likable and logical. Some say they might have the « dumb character syndrome » but most of the time they act fairly logically and also, medical school is a bitch and it definitely affected them to the deepest. May they be freed from the torment of medical school and their parents.
As for the pixies NONE OF THEM CAN BE TRUSTED ☠️ and that definitely includes Shyloh and Kai, just saying, they might act the kindest but they’re definitely extremely suspicious. Ofc all of this is said in a good way, love their personalities etc.
I knew the pixies would act like bitches (since the trigger warnings etc) but wow, I didn’t expect the switch up to be THAT sudden and brutal. Even tho even before we had some foreshadowing esp from Helios and Merka, it still caught me off guard. Like i expected lots of thing, but them to straight up JUMP the mc ? These pixies are TWISTED (esp Rosario and Helios I JUST HAVE A GUT FEELING ABT THESE TWO)
As for the art. The one who made the sprites is peak, the designs are also very distinctive and we can see how they communicate each characters personality. The OST ? Top tier. The backgrounds ? Top tier too.
I might have my favorites, personality and beauty speaking (Rosario and Helios) but I think I’ll try and do all the routes, for the fact that all the characters, from what I see in the demo, are interesting and I’m genuinely hooked to the story and lore. I fr cant wait for the full release of the game
The customization of the mc is very nice, and im glad there would be more options in the future. On the NSFW part, the fact the player can choose between if they want to sub or dom is a very nice addition that I didn’t rlly see in other games
For the TWs, I wonder if for the full release we would have TWS released for every individual route. Although I know for which pixie the stitching tag applies the most …
Closing thoughts: Don’t go to med school. Rosario is hot and sus. Does the pixies have « nationalities »? And if not what could they have been ? Cant wait for the full release
just realized there’s literally individual route tws ☠️☠️☠️
Ahh, I'm so sorry for taking so long to reply! I hope you have a blast exploring them <3
Oh my gosh, thank you so much for taking the time to write such a lovely and detailed comment! I’m absolutely thrilled you created an account just to share your thoughts—it truly means a lot and has genuinely made my week! (≧▽≦)
I did receive a few comments about Sev's character, but it’s heartwarming to see her persona resonate with some players! Med school definitely has its challenges...
ensuing tragedy for Sev.Also, your intuition is spot on—none of the pixies can be trusted! I aimed to make them as morally grey as possible, leaning towards darker themes in the demo while leaving room for redemption in the full release. I wanted to explore the good/evil dynamic, and I’m so glad that players like you have picked up on those hints, even for the characters who appeared good in the demo! (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄) I can’t thank the team enough for their incredible efforts; everyone did a fabulous job bringing the vision to life!
I’m also super glad you like the toggle options! I hope the NSFW position selection feature adds a fun twist! The individual TWs are available in the Extras menu, and there’ll be a popup asking if you’re sure you want to be spoiled, but it should be there! There might be a few tiny changes when the full release drops, depending on editing, but the main content is all set for now! (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ
As for your question about the pixies' nationalities, I haven’t picked any specific ones. I envisioned them as characters from a painting, so feel free to create your own headcanon! (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ
i can tell that game is going to leave an impact on me ☠️ cant wait for the full release
OMG, the pressure is on XD
"every1 a red flag" leave kai out of this
loved it ik there be horror but it still took me a back ik by the hints being easy 2 pick up on but omg the writting is great i was shocked even when expecting it
Heya Su! You must be quite the experienced reader to have picked up on those subtle hints, but I’m so glad it didn’t take away from your experience of the horror side of the game. Thank you for giving our game a try and for such a motivating comment. I hope you’ll enjoy the full release just as much (Kai will def appreciate it as well, hehe~)
i think its everything a demo should be hints u can grasp but still leaves mystery and great writing even when prepared nothing couldve prepared me for amazing writting excited too see full project when out and updates and joyus kai appreciates it (hes my fav)
kept the game in the background after i finished just for the music
its so so so good
Aww, that’s so kind of you to say Smile! Our composers did a fantastic job capturing the vibes of the story, so I’m really happy to hear you're enjoying the music after finishing the game. Thank you for playing, I hope you’ll love the full release tracks just as much! ^^
heyy, i cant seem to play the game everytime i install it it just doesnt start the game it just shows the files and the exe and if i click on the exe nothing happens. please help i really want to play the game:( im on pc btw
Hey Moxhie! Thanks for letting us know about the error you've been facing. I’ve uploaded new builds, so fingers crossed the issue is fixed now. Let me know if everything's working smoothly or if you're still running into any problems ^^
Curious to know about your thoughts after playing the game~
Yaaay! I’m so happy the plot twist caught you off guard, ginkgoleafly ^^ It can be such a 50/50 situation when writing these kinds of twists, so I’m thrilled to hear you enjoyed it. And knowing it’s one of your top games? Aww, that absolutely made my day! Thank you so much for playing and for leaving this wonderful comment—it really means a lot. I hope you stick around for the full release as well!
*Ignores the horror tag* surely nothing bad will happen and this will be a good christian otome. Seriously though, this demo was wonderful, keep up the good work.
We’re definitely sticking to the number one rule of a good Christian otome—nothing suspicious going on here, folks ;) The pixies are super sparkly for a reason, duh! Because sparkle = sugar, spice, and everything nice, of course. But seriously, thank you so much for playing our game, nekokitwolf! Comments like yours boost our team's motivation a hundredfold~ We’ll keep up the good work, and I hope you enjoy the full release just as much! ^^
omfg sooo much potential!! even just the prologue is so good, im hooked !!!
shyloh (do we get to know his name in-game yet, or did I just miss a scene?) is such a cutie!!! I will stay with him !!!!!! so excoted for future updates! :3
Hi hi, Maya! Yaaay, I’m so excited to hear you loved the demo~ You have no idea how happy that makes me—it’s like my morale level just skyrocketed, haha ^^ As for Shyloh, he doesn’t get named in the demo, but in the full release, you’ll have a super special moment where his name is revealed (since Shyloh means “gift from God”—pretty fitting, right?). Bonus tidbit, since he’s such a beloved character, he’ll definitely have more assets in the upcoming release ;)
this game is amazing. thnank you so much
Thank you so much for playing our game and for leaving this lovely comment, urnotjoon! Your support truly means the world to us <3
no lie when I saw this I started to panic cry and scream out of joy how the hell did she make them sooo hot now I have to pick only one! Why did you do this to me!🥺🥺
OMGGG Daizyyy, I totally get what you mean! Every time I look at the pixies, I’m mesmerized by their hotness too T~T I’m simply counting down the days until the full release, where I can share their remaining artwork—AHHH! Seriously, thank you so much for giving our game a shot, and knowing that you loved it so much makes me incredibly happy! <3
Just played for the first time, and I am very impressed so far! The story is very interesting and all of the characters in the painting feel like characters I would have made up as a kid (twist included!!) so it felt incredibly cathartic to read and definitely got me invested. xD
I will say that I agree with RinRan below completely. The most frustrating thing for me while playing was Sev's naivety, which I can understand to a certain extent. You do a good job conveying how sheltered they were by their family so it makes sense that they don't know who to trust and aren't picking up on certain details in their interactions with the pixies. That being said, it's very frustrating as a player to not have a choice during what feels like a very pivotal moment (going with the heros or staying with the villain), especially when we get to make very minor choices leading up to that moment and then getting to make the same choice later on in what feels like a less meaningful moment. I agree with RinRan that an illusory choice would be ideal in this situation where the outcome is ultimately the same, but still leaves the player feeling in control of Sev and the story.
I'm so excited to see what else you have in store for us, particularly with Kai and Rosario. It feels like there's a lot to them lurking below the surface and I'm excited to learn more! Regardless, as long as best baby boy Shiloh is involved, I can't be disappointed~💕
I absolutely adore long comments like this, and I feel so grateful every time I receive them from players, so thank you for taking the time to write this, FluffyAlpaca! I’m glad to hear you connected with the cast and storyline! Maybe the pixies' powers are affecting the real world too—who knows? ;)
I totally understand where you’re coming from with RinRan's comment. Just so you know, we’ve decided to sprinkle in some illusionary choices to cater to the players' wishes. Ultimately, for Sev to see the other pixies’ true colors and gain points for their routes, she’ll need to go along with them. I’m also looking into ways to make the pixies seem less suspicious. If you have any thoughts on that, I’d love to hear your ideas!
For now, I’m super glad to hear that Kai, Rosario, and Shyloh are your characters of interest! They definitely have intense emotions regarding Sev, so we’ll have to wait and see how their stories unfold! ^^
Sorry for the late reply! I wanted to replay the game again so I could give the most accurate feedback possible, but my laptop broke. 🥲 Had to borrow my wife's Mac, RIP.
So, first off I have to say that I'm very impressed by how engaged you are with fans! I think it's a big deal when a creator hears some constructive feedback and actually wants to work to improve the areas that fans are struggling with while still maintaining the integrity of their creative vision. It speaks very well of your character and makes me even more excited to see this game completed; because I know that you and the team are working extra hard to make this game the best version of itself possible! Thank you~ I'm very glad to hear that you'll be implementing some illusory choices, and I can't wait to experience them firsthand!
As for ways to make the pixies seem less suspicious...the only suggestion I really have is to possibly make the pixies a bit less hostile towards Sev in the beginning. While I can see that that is simply their personalities (toned down even, yikes haha), the most red-flag aspect to me is how cruel they sometimes act in comparison to Shyloh; who (while definitely somewhat creepy) was always kind to Sev in their interactions. Some of the pixies (Helios and Merka in particular) were a bit too aggressive in the way they speak to Sev at times. This definitely makes sense in hindsight, but at the time had me shaking my head at Sev: 'Honey, why are you taking their verbal abuse when baby boy is right over there? 😔'.
However, I do want to emphasize that I don't think it's completely necessary to change the way they speak to Sev. I think adding the illusory choice to go with the pixies at the start will go a long way towards reducing the impact of the red flags they're initially giving off. On subsequent playthroughs, I was picking up on hints and dialogue that I was simply unable to in my first playthrough due to the fact that I was focusing so heavily on my frustration with the lack of a choice at what felt like a very pivotal scene. For example: in my first playthrough I found it very suspicious that the others weren't even slightly concerned with helping Helios when Shyloh grabbed him, but on my second playthrough, I realized that Helios literally explains why afterwards! I just wasn't paying attention the first time because I was hyperfocusing on my frustration. 🤦♀️
I hope this all makes sense; if there's anything you're confused by, please don't hesitate to ask me to elaborate! This ended up much more long and rambly than I intended, haha. Anyway, thanks for hearing me out! Each time I play this demo, I get more and more excited for the full release! I will definitely be playing every single route at least once, but Shyloh's will absolutely be getting played at least a dozen times, I'm calling it now 💖
oh wow was not at all prepared for the twist !! sure definitely noticed some attitued from some of the characters but wow what a plot twist !! So excited for the full game even tho i cant really see a "happy ending" for now lmaoo lucky me i like horror romance <33
Oh-Ma-Gawd, Nea! I’m so excited to hear that you experienced the twist and got caught off guard—YAAAAAAY! You never really know if people will be surprised during the writing process, so I’m thrilled to hear our efforts paid off! T~T It’s all thanks to players like you who comment that make us so excited to share our work <3
Just a heads-up from one of my previous responses: not all pixies will have a happy ending. Personally, I love when characters in otome games can take different paths—some might try to redeem themselves for how they’ve treated the MC, or even remain enemies if their actions are beyond forgiveness. It adds depth to the story! And while I’d love to create a yandere romance for every character, it wouldn’t always make sense or could make the MC seem unrealistic for going along with it.
Ultimately, there’s the romance factor, but we also have to consider the underlying sins behind those feelings. Will a love story built on greed be more stable, or one founded on lust? The same questions can apply to pride, wrath, envy, and more...
So, I’m going to keep you on your toes for a bit longer until the full release! ^^ Do you have any favorite characters in mind whose routes you’re excited to test out first when the game is fully finished? I’m really curious to hear your thoughts~
im so surprised rn i need more
Hehe, I’m so glad we managed to catch you off guard, Ari~ I hope you enjoy the full release we have in store for you as well <3
Thank you for giving our game a play!
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100/10 beautiful game. I absolutely adored it and tbh it's written a bit too well, like the manipulation and the moral greyness of all the characters is honestly.... realistic.
Like the hero's do have a point, that Shlyo is a bit stalkerish, and although I disagree with how they isolate him.
The LI's do genuinely believe in their cause, and that makes them complex characters.
My stomach sunk while playing this game as everyone is a red flag, and it seems to me that regardless of the route, the Mc is in trouble.
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like I'm scared for the Mc. And I'm not joking, except in sloth's route. He seems good... or so I think.
BUNNYYY, THIS COMMENT MEANS THE WORLD TO ME RIGHT NOW! I can literally feel your excitement through the screen, and it makes me so happy as a creator. Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts! I’m a bit late to respond, but I kept re-reading your comment whenever I got stuck during the writing process—it was so motivating! And I saw your comment in the voting section of the game, which just doubled my excitement <3
As for your thoughts, you’re totally on the mark! I really aimed to flesh out the character motivations in a way that aligns with their love archetypes while also highlighting the sinful aspects of their personas. I wanted to create a strong connection in their interactions with Sev, our MC, so I’m thrilled to hear that translated well into the player experience. As for our Pixie of Sloth (Kai's) route, I’ll keep it vague for now, but just know that the mask is there for a reason, hehe~
Will the MC be able to keep going and survive? That’s a question for our full release, so I’m going to keep you on your toes for a while longer ;)
I know that was necessary for the plot and further unexpected turns, but never ever I wanted to punch anyone in the face so much as the MC at the beginning of the story lol
My villian, my dear, I love you ❤️
Many thanks for creating such an amazing character, I want to hug him and give him the whole world. Hope in the full release I can do that hehe
Other characters also are... something 🫢
This comment took me out FHJGSJGFS! As the writer, I strongly urge you to hold off on punching Sev for now XD
I got a few comments during EpyksLion's playthrough, and it hit me that 'Stupid MC Syndrome' was happening IRL. Two main critiques: 'Why didn’t Sev use a bigger weapon to kill the pixies?' Valid, but she can only conjure stuff she's familiar with, plus I wanted it tied to her medical background (instead of just saying 'Hey, she studies medicine and has trauma from her overbearing parents' LOL). I'll make that clearer in a future patch.
Another one was that she ignored the red flags and went with the pixies. First, we needed more MC-pixie interactions without our villain. Second, one pixie's power affects Sev’s behavior, but maybe that clue was too buried. I'll work on highlighting that better too.
Those were the big ones, but let me know if you think of other reasons why MC was so punchable. If it’s not a 'rewrite the whole story' thing, we can tweak it for the full release! The MC gets smarter post-route selection, but the initial naivety annoyed a lot of people, lol. Love to implement the feedback tho ^^
On a positive note, I’m thrilled you loved our villain! Seeing players enjoy his character means a lot, especially since he's been the spoiled baby in development XD Highest CG count and even an extra ending—bias, who? Please.
BTW, do you like any of the other pixie characters? I'd love to hear your thoughts on them too.
I'm glad I could make you laugh and thank you for listening to your audience!
As for the MC... probably for me the reason to feel this way about them is that their behavior was not entirely logical. I'll explain why. Of course they are scared and shocked, so their reaction to the villain is quite understandable, but at the same time they behave quite rudely towards a person who did nothing bad to them and is simply offering help. But when you listen to what the MC says, it feels like they kicking a puppy. Moreover, Sev is a doctor, so besides being wary, they should have curiosity, logic, and a desire to understand. But they don't want to listen to the villain... well, yes, Sev asks two questions, but it seems that they already set themselves against everything villain says. Why tho? Especially since Sev had "seen" the villain before and in the dream he showed nothing but warmth, sadness, and tenderness. So aren't they simply interested in understanding how their dream is connected to what's happening? Why do they see this particular person? However, they're not given much time alone, so maybe they will be able to talk more in the future.
However, when six (six!) complete strangers appear in front of the MC, they're like... yeah, this is definitely much better than the single person who hasn't shown any aggression and already promised to help get me home. Pfff. Well, I mean, even if just think about it, it’s much easier to run away from 1 person than from 6 if things get messy, no? And they all call the villain, well... a "villain" heh, but some of the "heroes" are noticeably sarcastic towards the MC! And like, I wouldn't follow a person who mocks me with words, calling me "stupid". I wouldn't follow a whole crowd of strange, unfamiliar people. Considering that the villain literally begs not to do it, I would be curious about the reason why he says that. The pixies call him a "villain", but why should I believe them? So far, he hasn't done anything bad to Sev. Or at least, like you said, make it more clear that the MC's consciousness is being manipulated. Because for now it seems that Sev is just emm extremely naive and was easily tricked by the beautiful appearance.
I understand that Sev is a separate personality, and not a "player", but it is still a game, so more choices would be nice.
You know about "choices without a choice"? It's an option in games where you give the player the illusion of choice, but it doesn't affect the game's main story line. It may affect the characters' relationships with each other or with the main character, but it will not affect the plot in any way. The most obvious example is the moment when the protagonist decides who to go with. This is the perfect moment to add the possibility of "illusion".
You give the players two options. The first is to go with pixies. Nothing changes here, but the player chooses this option themself, so they will not have the feeling that it was forced or chosen for them by someone else.
The second is to choose the villain. However! The illusion is that when the MC makes this decision, manipulative pixie will increase his magic, the villain will notice this and in order to protect, the same attack scene will happen again. Something like "thank you very much, but he already offered to help me, so... oh, weird, why I'm so dizzy right now."
In this case, MC can also stop the villain (in the same manner), because he clearly fell into a state of affect and it would be impossible to stop him with just words. In this case, you let the players choose who they want, but the plot will still force MC to intervene anyway, and the pixies took advantage of this.
In games, it is very important to give players the control, especially when making important decisions, even if it ends up being just an illusory choice^^
Well, regarding the pixies, I won't describe my feelings for each character so that it doesn't become a spoiler, but they are interesting, they clearly represent exactly what they are supposed to. I'm a fan of horror date sim VNs, so I would gladly surrender myself into the hands of dangerous crazy obsessively possessive yanderes, but in this case the villain completely captured my heart.
Oh wow, thank you for the detailed feedback, RinRan! I really appreciate you taking the time to write this constructive criticism.
We originally planned for each choice to have a score system to impact the story and unlock different routes, but due to delays and asset preparation issues, we didn't finish it in time for the jam. Illusionary choices were extra and not prioritized, but since we've passed the deadline, we can add some for player satisfaction without altering the storyline too much.
Regarding Sev, her situation is tricky because of multiple factors. Sev's naivety comes from her sheltered upbringing, causing her to reject Shyloh's warmth due to unfamiliarity and being overwhelmed. Her choice of villains is triggered by the choking scene with Helios. We can reduce red flags from the pixies and introduce a relevant story twist sooner to balance perceptions.
All in all, I'm going to try my best to address the stuff you mentioned. Some aspects are a little set in stone since changing them would mean altering someone's character or the story plot significantly, but others are easier to adjust ^^
I'm really glad to hear that you're curious about the other villains as well! I'm planning to introduce some twists to explore their backstories and what led them to become who they are. I hope you'll enjoy these additions and find them to be an engaging experience!
I love the game so far! I can't wait to play the finished product <3 speaking of that, how much would it cost?
Also when playing the game, there were times my character was referred to with the wrong pronouns ( I picked he/him, it kept on using she/her )
Thank you very much for your comment! I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed our game ^^
As for your question - the final release will be free-to-play!
Regarding the pronoun issue, I'm soooo sorry to hear that :( our team double-checked the code for any errors in the script implementation but we must've missed something if you're encountering said problem.
As such, would it be possible for you to upload the screenshots/write down the lines (with the false pronouns) on this FEEDBACK FORM? It will greatly help us with correcting the issue for a future patch :D
Alright, I'll be sure to fill out the form once I'm free! Thank you so much!
Awesomeeee! Thanks a bunch, vamprel <3
That would reallyyy help us out a lot ^^
Just a quick update on this comment: the pronoun issues have been corrected in the newest build! We couldn’t have done it without your help, Vamprel. Thank you so much for your assistance! ^^
When first booting up the game, I forgot to download the Extended Demo files!
In truth, I’m fascinated by this story’s concept. Having our “villain” be a muted gray compared to the vibrant hues of the “heroes”; the potential of that idea and how much knowledge he holds… I really like how the demo carefully unravels only snippets of the story yet to come!
POTENTIAL SPOILERS (+ Rambling)
It makes you wonder! Do the cast each relate to or represent different stages of grief too? And ways the mind compartmentalize lived experiences? Or symbols of what Sev sought under the abuse dealt to them? And their wings and animal features, probably relate to aspects of their character - or an additional warning for what’s to come?
Is Shyloh the main holder of the most traumatic memories, which is why he claims to know the answers we seek? Someone Sev created to protect them from those who’ve hurt them, a vindicator in fear of the cycle of harm and loss repeating? Because he is unnamed, does that villain represent the fear of grappling with realizing Sev’s family has hurt them? His missing wing, the scars, treated as an outcast and scorned by the other pixies; does he reference that isolation imposed upon the MC growing up?
Or is Shyloh an ideal of someone escaping and finding freedom from the ones who have attempted to destroy him? Is his reverence a coping mechanism for old wounds? Perhaps this dysfunction is a reflection of Sev’s mental state or desire to be whisked away from their troubles too.
Either way, despite how much this comment focuses on our “villain,” I want to dissect and psychoanalyze each of these characters. Thank you and your team for all the hard work in delivering a snapshot of Chromatic Agape! Excited to see where this world born from paint takes our protagonist and the pixies.
Heya there, Noni! I’m really sorry for the delay in responding to your wonderful comment. It was so beautifully written that I wanted to take my time to give it the attention it deserves. Your analysis truly made my day—it’s one of my favorite comments on the game page! (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)
As you mentioned, I aimed to create characters that embody moral complexity, diving into darker themes in the demo while leaving space for redemption in the full release. I'm thrilled that players like you have picked up on the good/bad dynamic, even with characters who seem virtuous at first! (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ
Regarding your insights on grief, we’ll explore that more deeply in the full release, and you’re right on track! Sev's struggles with her trauma from her overbearing parents and the pressure to suppress "sinful" emotions like pride, envy, greed, etc...
She essentially has the power of a God within the painting, but her understanding is limited by her experiences, like when she used the propofol injection and scalpel instead of conjuring stronger weapons to wipe all the pixies. That’s why she must undergo a character evolution to unlock more of her power and understand the motives behind each species' actions.
As for the wings and animal features, each was carefully chosen and carries certain hidden symbolism. For instance, we selected the Goliathus Beetle for Yulen, the Hero of Wrath, to embody strength and resilience. Initially, we thought about using a dragonfly for Kai, the Hero of Sloth, symbolizing change/rebirth, but we ultimately opted for mantis wings due to a pivotal moment in his route (avoiding spoilers, of course). So yes, these details are intentional, and I’m so glad you noticed them—congratulations on being one of the few to do so! (✧ω✧)
Your interpretation of Shyloh is spot on! I feel like adding too much might spoil future developments, but his title as the nameless pixie reflects Sev's struggle to accept him. While she remembers the names and behaviors of other pixies, Shyloh’s protective nature and affection for her remain an enigma she can’t quite grasp. It’s a fascinating dynamic to explore, and I can’t wait to see how it unfolds! ✧(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
If you have any more questions or comments, feel free to drop them! I’d love to answer them!!!
I rlly like this game little green man is my fav.
also a very interesting story!! im gonna be thinkin about this for months...
OMG, Merka has a fan already? FJSGHJSGFJ Our little man is so stoked to hear that! (But shhh, don’t let him know I mentioned his height—he might come and take my typing hands away! XD)
Aside from that, I’m so thrilled to see your lovely comment, Bigsimpbrain! Thank you for giving our game a shot, and I hope you stick around for the full release as well! ^^
Thanks for the reply!!! and oh yes.... I'll be waitin on the edge of my seat hehe. >:)