love this game sooo much, my fav will always be the Villain (he's the sweetest of all these crazy mfs) , and ngl the purple Dlif is kinda hot, this is such a well-written game! <33
though I have to ask, is there any way to achieve all of the endings? I've only done one playthrough for now and got the 'to be continued'
The MC got on my nerves though GOSH I JUST WANTED TO KNOCK SOME SENSE INTO THIS GIRL. But, again, I'd love to comment on how each character had its own different type of red flag, even though Kai is somehow trustworthy. (still sus) that golden guy was just straight-up CREEPY and the stitch scene made me afraid tbh. Love this game sooooo much and so excited for the full one! <<3 all the love pookie! <33
LOL I’ve definitely seen the Sev comments from a few players! I’m working on tweaking the demo a bit to make sure she’s not coming across as too... y'know, but it’s still a little sad to hear, aww.
That said, it really warms my heart to know the horror elements are still shining through, even with the hot yandere pixies taking the spotlight! I’m always checking myself while writing to make sure it’s still creepy enough.
And hey, be careful— Helios might just come around and gaslight you into thinking you’re in love with him! XD
Also, if you could take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much (^‿^v)
Heya Ghosty ^^ I’m so glad to hear you loved the game! Also, it’s awesome to see some Pew-Paw Adonis fans—he definitely deserves more love! XD As for the endings, there are currently only two available for the demo (Ending 1 & Ending 2). The “to be continued” part is for when we have the full release. The common route will pick up from there and continue until the route calculation point.
Hi there, sinnercinna~ I’m so happy to hear you loved the game!
Right now, the game is in its demo stage, so there are only two endings available (Ending 1 and Ending 2). Because of that, I think writing a separate tutorial for them might not be super helpful just yet. But don’t worry— once the full release is out, there will be plenty more endings to discover ^^
Also, if you could take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much (^‿^v)
First of shout out to whoever did the ost for the ending 1. It’s my favorite of all the osts, it captures the oppressive atmosphere of the scene so well. It feels like being locked in a tiny room and being slowly suffocated by the heaviest incense/bukhoor ever.
In the cg for the scene, yk the one with Sev’s hand, we can see some sort of rainbow light and butterflies
Is it supposed to be some sort of symbolism or just for aesthetism ?
I think the lights and butterflies gives a dazed feeling to the pic. As if Sev is in some sort of surreal nightmare
Ooo, in Ending 1, there are two tracks! The first one you hear at the start is called "The Edge of Reluctance" by Moximog, and the one near the end, right before the final lines, is "Unraveling Doom" by Bismii.
As for the hand, that’s actually Rosario’s hand, not Sev’s! And yes, the light and butterflies are packed with both symbolism/aesthetics. If you take a closer look, you’ll notice how it differs from the other hallucination CG— that might be a little clue for you!
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OMG REAL ? AND HERE I THOUGHT THIS ENTIRE TIME HE CAME ON THEIR HAND. Should have paid closer attention to the sleeve. My worldview is forever changed.
Now for the lights and butterflies I’ll be honest this time I don’t have any outlandish explanation for the symbolism.
Maybe Rosario’s uuh release got special properties. I mean, he said something or two about his shahvat. In the discussion with Merka and in the ending 1
Hi I need a little confirmation on Kai’s design. First I thought it was some sort of kimono/hanfu but then I saw there wasn’t a crossed collar.
But also his design makes me think of a (highly revisited) monk attire, mainly the belt tbh. So yea, what are the inspos behind Kai’s outfits I wanna see if I’m right
You're totes right Jasmine! Remember how last time you mentioned the lotus flower? Well, that's a key symbol in both Hinduism and Buddhism. The rest of his outfits also take a similar direction.
You can also see it in the open chest design since in both religions, the chest area is closely associated with the heart, which is symbolic of spiritual growth, compassion, and wisdom, also known as an embodiment of divine love and compassion (we also really wanted to showcase the tattoos LOL)
Our art director was the person who did his character design so a lot of thought went it it, hehe~~
So Kai really is the more spiritual-driven of the bunch, like the one who I think got the less connections to the material world. From the religious references(so from Christianity, Buddhism and Hinduism ?), to the way he acts so detached and passive, even his blue-ish skin tone.
And concerning his tattoos, I can also see insects? Idk, I’ve also seen that they’ll be important in his route … do they symbolize anything or is it mainly for the horror aspect ?
Kai’s skin tone plays a really significant role in his storyline. I’m super curious to hear what you think it might be! (It’ll help me see if the twist catches you off guard!) As for the insects… I can’t give too much away, but they’re both symbolic and a source of horror~ (and it's gonna be torture to program because of the on/off toggle for it T~T)
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In my opinion he’s probably not totally alive. Like he’s not on the same level as the others.
First, obviously the skin tone, that’s not the skin of an alive and breathing person with blood running in their veins.
Then, his demeanor. As I said he’s very not connected to the material world. His way of speaking himself in the 3rd person. Helios uses « one » mostly to, idk how to say it, makes his speech more formal and also emphasize his opinions. Kai uses the 3rd person as if he’s not really here.
Ofc, the numerous references to religion and especially what happens after death in said religions (lotus, reincarnation, Buddhism 🤔 am I connecting the dots)
Also, in the dialogue where our mc is getting mega jumped and she gets the choice to look pleadingly at a pixie (as if they’ll save her haha …). When picking Kai he says something like « I sense the funeral pyre drawing near ». I mean, the other pixies mostly said things like « nooo haha we will torture you some more » but Kai made a direct reference to death. Ok 🤔
And now, the insects. Who eats the bodies of our decomposing dead ? YOU GET IT. (Talking about eating the dead, are we getting eaten alive by centipedes in his route 👀?)
And I’m certain his veil also ties to the world of the dead etc. He makes me think of these depictions of spirits with translucent fabrics on them
Conclusion to me, Kai’s probably not totally alive. I mean just look at him
Haha, I love the theory you’ve got going! It’s going to be so much fun to save these and come back to them once the full release is out— seeing what you got right or wrong, hehe~~ Do you have any theories for the other characters too? I'd dying to hear them! <33
happy crying jumping i can't believe i JUST found this masterpiece??? absolute 100/10! the writing, the art style, the story line, the characters MWAH ABSOLUTELY PERFECT. yandere visual novels are very much my thing and i always try to dig deeper in game sites and find anything revolving it. when i played this, i could feel the gaslighting vibes deep in my bone marrow and i was giggling kicking my feet the whole time because yes PLEASE hot fictional 2d men, manipulate me MORE (i'm mentally ill).
all of them are suspicious in their own way that it's just interesting. the "heroes", while hot, immediately felt unsettling to me because of how condescending they were towards shyloh. i was flaring because LEAVE HIM ALONE!!! HE'S JUST A SILLY LITTLE GUY!!! CAPABLE OF MURDER BUT HE DID NOTHING WRONG!!! and yes, shyloh is absolutely loco in the head BUT... his devotion... the yearning in his eyes... i love myself a TRUE YEARNER HE'S JUST LIKE ME FR! LITERALLY VIBRATING IN MY SEAT RN I NEED HIM. i was also lowk pissed off at helios for doing kai like that. i can assume kai did something horrible before but i helplessly have a soft spot for characters who treated the mc gently when no one else did </3 FUCK U HELIOS I DON'T LIKE YOU.
feeling like the characters' descriptions on this page don't even match how they act in-game, these mfs fooled us. except shyloh ofc my babygirl i'll keep you tucked away safely in my pocket where no one will hurt you ..
anyw i think i missed out on so many foreshadowing and hints for future content or backstory, so hoping i could play it over and notice them. UNFORTUNATELY, i can never bring myself to side with the "heroes". I'm so hooked on the little villain that there's no going back for me.....
SKY, YOU’RE KILLING ME WITH THE VIBES! (´▽`ʃƪ)♡ This entire response had me grinning ear to ear. Your energy is absolutely contagious! I love how into Shyloh you are— he totally deserves all that chaotic worship, and you’re giving him the perfect level of unhinged love.
And yes, we’re both on the same wavelength with wanting to protect him, but honestly? You’ve got to hurt him more for that even deeper, maniacal adoration to surface (since you know yandere tropes, you probs know what I mean). P.S. since I’m biased, Shyloh’s got extra CGs… hehe (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
Also, your comments about Helios? MAW GAWD. The Helios slander is chef’s kiss, and you’re going to have such a fun time with his plot twist in the full release. He might even become your second bias…who knows? LOL
But seriously, I’ve packed in so many hints for the demo version, and if you’re looking for some clues, there’s another player here, @jasmine flower, who’s analyzed a HUGE portion of the Easter eggs. You’ve gotta check out her comments too. Thank you so much for your amazing million-out-of-ten comment, seriously, made my day! ♡♡♡
OMG Im being mentionned hihi. Anyways it wont be hard to find the analysis of the other easter eggs since my yapping takes up a HUGE portion of the comment section lmaoo and I’m not done with it either
(Update, turns out I’m not the number one fan of chromatic agape ☠️ I only noticed NOW that Adonis had facial hair …)
Haha, Jasmine, you caught me! Now I'm feeling a bit shy FSJFGSJGSJFG But seriously, the motivation boost in your comments is A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! As for Adonis, he's been trying to grow a beard forever but just doesn’t have the needed Ehsas for it (since nothing new is coming in). Hopefully he's still Daddy enough XDD
Thank you smmm Im glad to know that my comments are motivating you.
So you’re telling me Adonis have been trying to grow a beard since forever but can’t ? That just gives me more fuel for Adonis slander YESSS (maybe he should try castor oil)
Haha, not the Adonis slander! XDDD Pee-paw's definitely got his work cut out for him if he’s trying to win you over ( ≖‿ ≖ ) No amount of castor oil could save the guy's failing beard, but he could def use a prosthetic eyeball LOL
OMG, I’LL DIE HAPPY!!! <33 This has been my dream since making the game LOL Please, please, please tag me on socials when you post it—I have to see and scream about it AHHHHHHHHH!
(Don’t forget to share it here too, I’m so hyped~~)
We see Kai seemingly “helping” (or is he ? Cant even tell. Cant trust no one) our protagonist with his veil in the presence of the other pixies that have nothing but bad intentions
Why didnt they intervene tho ? Did they not see him or is it completely deliberate (but then they also didnt intervene when Shyloh choked tf out of Helios or when Rosario just went at it in the ending 1)
So yea, did Helios deem Kai’s antics with Sev as not a big deal for his plan ? Or did they somehow all got distracted and didnt see Kai helping Sev ? Or maybe Kai himself didnt have good intentions too in the first place
You learned how to use the spoiler tag?! OMG, I still haven’t figured it out myself— you’ve got to teach me! Also, congrats, Jasmine~ I love the new name, by the way. <33
Okay, so I’ll try to avoid spoilers as much as possible, but here’s the gist: Kai did something in the past (back when he was the leader) that turned him into an outcast. Because of this, nobody really cares what he does as long as he stays out of their way. Oh, and unrelated side note: I tweaked his dialogue with Helios a bit to make Helios seem less suspicious to new readers. I felt like I was overemphasizing how much Helios looks down on Kai, so I toned it down a little.
Anyway, Kai is helping Sev because he wants something from her. (Spoiler alert— I can’t go into details yet!) For the first event, where the fake Shyloh (shapeshifted Rosario) attacks Sev, it’s actually part of their plan. They’re trying to make Sev believe it’s really Shyloh to give her a false impression of him.
As for the second event, that’s more Kai-driven. The veil he gives Sev helps reduce her pain (or maybe it’s just a placebo effect, like covering up a wound... who knows?) The other pixies don’t really care about this because, from their perspective, she’s going to die anyway, and they’ll get her pure life essence regardless.
Now, about Shyloh and Helios’s choking scene: Helios hadn’t given Shyloh the signal yet (he even explains this to Sev when she asks about it). The whole ploy was to paint Shyloh as the bad guy, and if the others intervened, it wouldn’t have had the same impact. Similarly, with Rosario, they didn’t care about her actions as long as the end goal—Sev’s death—was achieved.
Ultimately, Helios doesn’t think much of Kai because of something Kai did in the past. This event still affects him and his interactions with the others. Even Kai’s effort with the veil doesn’t change much in the end because Sev still dies. That’s kind of the theme with Kai’s arc; his good intentions don’t always change the outcome.
In terms of intentions, they’re split: in the first incident with the veil, he’s aligned with the pixies because he wants something from Sev (and no, it’s not Ehsas like the others want). In the second incident with the pixie's ending, his actions seem well-meaning, but whether or not he succeeds in getting what he wants is left ambiguous; it’s something tied to his route.
Hope that cleared things up a bit more! By the way, do you think the whole veil situation is a little confusing? If so, I could look into clarifying the demo text to make it easier to follow.
It was time to switch from the keyboard smash I had as an username to expressing my love for the best flower in the world.
And here’s a tutorial on spoiler tags by me, first you go on your page and to settings. On your profile settings you’ll cross yes to the « prefer markdown input where available » little square and it will activate HTML text
So now here’s how to write the spoiler tags
(Leave a space when doing the summary line) so yes that’s it
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So to sum it up, the pixies are constantly in a IDGAF mood, nobody cares about Kai, he doesn’t have good intentions and his veil isn’t even guaranteed to really work. Sev is in the TRENCHES yea I would rather eat grass then be in her position.
For the choking scene since it was explained I didn’t problems understanding, but also, if Sev haven’t done anything would he have given the signal ? Or is Helios willing to die for that? But then if he dies = no leader so he probably would have made the signal 2 seconds away from having his throat crushed.
Tbh Rosario is probably the worst actor alive, like, he’s supposed to imitate Shyloh but didn’t even bother to also get his personality right. That would be funny if the pixies basically told Rosario « yea to weird Sev out just act as your usual self ».
Don’t worry for the veil part, I think it’s explained well
Btw I thought that Sev would have just been locked up somewhere and be drained from their ehsas or something, yk, something like a farmer that milks his cow but instead of milk the pixies get ehsas. But wow they straight up planned to get Sev killed 😨 Ill think of good ways to slander each of the pixies plus survival plans because there’s no way we’re lasting more than three hours in the routes ☠️
And I forgot, the most important question of them all. Do I have the chance of beating any of the pixies in a fight ? Additional magic and brass knuckles not included of course. Like on a scale of 0 to 10 what’s the probability of beating any of the pixies in a fight
Yesss, jasmine flowers are sooo underrated! I totally missed an opportunity to add some flower symbolism to the game T~T Also, thanks a bunch for the spoiler tag explanation~ I’m gonna give it a try and hope it works—fingers crossed!
UPDATE: IT WORKED YAAAAAAY <333
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Yep, the pixies really don’t care about anything except one thing: getting Sev’s life essence. Each of them has their own plans for it, tied to their personal motivations and sin arch-type. But here’s the catch— Sev’s emotions have made the essence all negative, so now they’re stuck trying to figure out how to deal with her. They could try being nice and shifting Sev’s perspective so her emotions aren’t so messed up, but naaaah— these pixies are too far gone themselves to bother.
Kai totally brought this mess on himself with something shady he did back when he was a leader. (The twist is gonna blow your mind, hopefully XD) Sev’s situation is rough, like really rough, but don’t count out the grass strategy just yet, there’s still hope! And hey, worst-case scenario, she’s flambé FSHGJFSGFJGFJSDGDJ
About Rosario— so glad you think it’s clear! Someone I had as an editor (who bailed in less than a week, btw) wanted me to spell it out more, and I was doubting myself. Like, is it really not obvious? So hearing that it lands is such a relief! Especially since I’m done tweaking the demo and was so not ready to dive back into edits again XDDD
As for the “milking Sev” thing… uh, yeah, it’s technically on the table. It all depends on which pixie would be most motivated to go that route. Think about their personalities and goals— who would go for a method like caging her, overworking her, or making her their personal slave?
And don’t worry, I’ve got you covered. She half-blinded Adonis in the demo? So, yeeees, you’ll totally get to fight back. Curious to hear which pixies have the possibility of dying LOL
If you’re fighting the pixies without powers, it’s like… a hard 0% chance of winning. Some won’t fight you, so there’s that, I guess? >u< If you’ve got powers, your odds jump to about 3/10, and with some clever psychological manipulation, you can bump it to 5/10. But if they don’t have powers and you do? Now we’re talking— 5/10 chance, or even 7/10 if you’re playing it smart. So yeah, it’s not all doom and gloom… maybe…
(Phew had HTML problems …) Dont worry about the flower symbolism we already got Rosario, as beautiful, passionate and especially thorny as a red rose (his name means rosary in Spanish and Italian, how ironic knowing who he is …). And by the way, is Kai’s earring a lotus flower ? In some religions and cultures, the lotus symbolizes purity, detachment from the material world and rebirth. A hint maybe ?
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Sighs if only the pixies spent their time studying psychology and therapy instead of maximizing the art of evilness … it would be better not only for them but for Sev too.
I’m already afraid about what Kai might have done like, wow, is it THAT BAD ?! What must he have done to get ostracized by the embodiments of evil themselves ? Also noticing the scars around his mouth … Punishment for what he have done maybe ?
We’re laughing about flambé-d Sev but then I see the cannibalism tag on Yulen’s route and yup, Sev kebab might become a real thing.
Also, concerning about whether things are clear or not in the demo I think they’re clear enough. And even so, personal opinion, if everything was 100% explicit and obvious then it would remove the pleasure of thinking, interpretation, pointing hidden things out, connecting the dots and conversation about said things. (And also if everything was laid out in the open then I wouldn’t find new things to say every time I play the demo)
… now if I go to the trigger warnings section, I’ll guess it’s the red haired leather fiend or his old one-eyed buddy. Sev really cant catch a break even out of medical school 😕 Realistically in a fight with no weapons ? Im getting turned into shish kebab by everyone. But in a fight using wits, weapons etc it’s true that Adonis got half blinded. His reflexes doesn’t seem great so just saying, he can kiss his other eye goodbye … And I could possibly take Yulen in a fight just because he’s the one who annoyed me the most, overcoming obstacles by pure pettiness. For anyone above 180cm except Adonis I wouldn’t even try. (Not the unsure « maybe » after the it’s not all doom and gloom ☠️ it’s so over for Sev)
Also how long is Rosario’s hair since the majority of it is hidden ? This is very important to me
Interesting fact, I actually considered writing down DID (Dissociative identity disorder) for Rosario in my earlier drafts! I’d planned for his dual personality to be called ‘Floreta’— one side would be super flirty, and the other would be really prudish, which would leave him conflicted about his emotions. But, I ended up scrapping the idea in the end LOL
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Also, oh ma gawwwwsh, you caught that with Kai! I don’t think there’s anything hidden from you anymore, haha XD You’ll also notice that the same flower design shows up on his tattoos. As for the meaning… well, I’ll leave that as a little mystery for now, but you’re definitely on the right track. As for what he’s done, it kind of depends on the person’s perspective. He made a choice that seemed like the most heroic option, but it ended up isolating him even more (feel free to take a guess!).
Imagine if the pixies actually went to therapy, though! Helios would probably turn the tables and be like, “Why must one satisfy your curiosity?” Yulen would definitely flip the table. Merka would totally exaggerate his sob stories to win the pity party. Adonis would either praise or punish the therapist, depending on how they respond. Kai would stay silent, of course, and Rosario would try to seduce the therapist to get them to spill their secrets instead. As for Shyloh… well, that’s for you to theorize! ^^
I see you’re really rooting for the Sev kebab, huh, Jasmine? XDDD
Adonis does have the disadvantage of being half-blind, but I’ve got an amazing horror CG saved up for him—you’re going to love it! <33 As for Yulen, you could definitely try reverse psychology with him. The more you resist, the more he’ll enjoy it. Just play dead, and you’ve got a shot. Another option is Helios— he doesn’t really like getting his hands dirty; he’s more of a delegator.
By the way, I’m super curious— how many times have you played the game by now? You keep finding new stuff every time, and I spent a solid 4 months actively working on hiding them all FJSGHFJSGHFJSGFJ
Oh! And about Rosario’s hair, I actually have a pic from his character design sheet. Let me check if I can share it with you~
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Hii I’m curious about the structure of the pixies « domains ». On one side Im imaginating the domains as equally beautiful, something straight out of the haft paykar. But also it’s kinda hard imaginating someone like Yulen have a beautiful domain with flowers everywhere. And also i wonder how is it inside, interior design says a lot about someone (already planning escape plans). And does Shyloh even got a domain ? Or is he just constantly on the run so he cant settle somewhere
Hiya Hehe, glad to read your comments once again! Do excuse the late reply, I usually try to respond to your questions as quick as I can but it's been quite the... emotionally straining week for VN development.
For the domains, they're all based on the character's personas/interests/archetypes/etc... Like you said, it wouldn't make sense to have Yulen running in a field of flowers XD However, it may have something to do with his tools (HINT: there are some clues in his duo dialogue with Adonis). Some of the pixies have interior-esque domains, while others are set on the outside, with one pixie having the best of both worlds (not gonna spoil who LOL)
As for Shyloh, I can't discriminate against the poor baby, he also has his own domain BUUUUUT... let's just say it's a tad different than the rest *eye stare emoji*
Also, I gotta ask, what kind of escape plans do you have in mind? Super curious~~
Hiii dont worry I know you’re working and all that take all the time you want
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I have an idea for who's having the best of both worlds (either Helios because he's the mighty leader or Rosario who seems very keen on aesthetics)
My theory is that Shylohs domain is either hidden or he lives a nomadic lifestyle
My current escape plans involve Adonis or Yulen since I know they probably have weapons hidden somewhere. So, when one of them isnt looking, we steal a weapon and boom they’re finished
Ooo, those are some really interesting theories! Though I can’t spoil which one’s right or wrong FJGHSJFGJSGFJSG Also, I love that you're plotting escape plans already <33 gotta think about the "what next" part too. Even if you manage to break free, where do you go from there? Because that’s the real challenge.
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Well after that ... rely on the power of hope and prayers and eat grass to survive, or maybe threaten Shyloh until he sends us back idk
Yup already plotting to escape, the chances of surviving (literally and figuratively) either of the pixies seem pretty low and thats ok because I love horror and creepyness the most
You're the creator of the realm— you don’t have anyone to pray to! XD But I love the "eat grass" idea, so I’ll definitely add it to the script (fingers crossed the editor keeps it in, LOL). Honestly, Shyloh would probably just wreck the entire world of the painting rather than let you go. That guy’s a total psycho (I wonder who made him that way...)
Cue dialogue- Merka "Haha, you think eating grass is gonna solve your problems?" Sev "Yes." Merka "Oh yeah? What’s next, hugging trees to fix your love life?" Sev "Actually, the tree said to cut out toxic people. So… byeeee." #Ending (saved by hehe power)
Aww, thank you so much, Ivy! Really appreciate the comment~ I'm such a big fan of character customization too, so I knew it had to be part of this project. And our sprite artist, Bobbert, absolutely outdid herself with all the amazing variations <3
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Your comment has me so pumped Ivy, I love love love it~ Shyloh is my own bias so I gotta treat the baby well... is what I tell myself, but then he ends up getting traumatized over and over again LOL Cute agresssion is reaaaal XD
Question about the routes. How will we choose ? Means do we choose directly after the demo (like how a lot of otome games work) or do we have to make particular dialogue choices in the common route to then get the specific route we want ?
Hey there, Hehe~ To answer your question, you'll unlock a character's route based on the points you earn in the common route. I decided not to have the player select directly because I feel like it would take away from the impact of the earlier choices. Plus, it adds a bit of extra dramaaaaa! XD
Yeaa I could have guessed that you would go towards the unlocking route. Im happy about that, means I’ll have to do extra thinking when making choices. I’ll do every single route and maybe endings anyways soooo
I saw that the game had winx club as inspiration and OMGG my worlds are colliding ☠️ that show was a whole part of my childhood Im so curious about how you’ll incorporate the references
Oh-ma-gawwwd, yeeees I love the idea of making the player work a little harder to get to know the characters— it makes each choice feel way more meaningful! One fun twist I’m planning is to have certain characters respond in unexpected ways— so if you pick what seems like the "nice" or "correct" option (like helping them or being friendly), it might actually lead to their bad ending. You’ll need to understand each character’s mindset to get the best results~~
As for the Winx inspiration— yes! That’s exactly where the whole fairy/pixie idea came from ^^ I feel like that show was such a big part of our childhoods. I even got the name 'Helios' from 'Helia' in the show, since he was one of my favorites (though his personality is totally different here, haha XDD). I had to separate them to keep things fresh!
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By certain characters I have a little feeling that a certain redheaded leather jacket wearer will definitely not mind at all if the player picks the mean options. But for the other characters yeaa ill have to work hard to determine which type of response they prefer (although I already have my ideas …) and that makes the whole game even better
By the way, again for the routes, we got 2 bad endings and 1 good end. Will the full story progress only from the good ending or also the bad endings ? Idk if I worded it well
I'm staying quiet for now, but the redheaded leather jacket wearer does have a thing or two for when you resist him~ Just be careful not to push his buttons too much XD Also, I gotta admit, I’m not quite sure what you meant by the comment about the endings/story progression. Could you clarify?
On the same note, the endings for certain characters might change depending on how the editing goes! For example, one character could have 1 bad, 1 neutral, and 1 good ending, or maybe just 2 bad and 1 neutral— it's still a bit up in the air (cause some of them, based on their routes, don't deserve a good ending ngl). But hey, everyone’s guaranteed to have at least one bad ending LOL equality at its finest.
Hii! I really reallyy enjoyed the demo. Every aspect of it was intriguing and always kept me interested with twists^^ I played through it about five times? I was wondering how many endings there are currently to make sure I got them all. Goodluck on finishing it!!
Hi there Val! Thank you so much for playing the demo (five times, WOWOW!) and for sharing such kind words—it means a lot to hear you enjoyed it and were hooked by all the twists! ^^ Super curious to know which characters are your faves btw <33
Currently, there are two bad endings for Sev. There's also the end of the demo where Shyloh saves you (this one isn't a game ending, just the end of the demo).
Also, if you could take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much (^‿^v)
You're so welcome^^ so far Helios would have to be my fav I'm always a big fan of angelic looking characters!! Although Shyloh is growing on me also. Thanks for clearing it up for me:3 I will definitely rate it right now!
Oh wow, that was such a quick response—also thank you for the fabulous rating, Val! <33 I’m so happy to meet another Helios fan! Honestly, he’s such a beloved character for me too, so we reallyyyy went all out with his motifs (and the pompous way of speaking LOL) ^^ His route is one of my absolute favorites, so I hope you get to it as much as I do XD
As for Shyloh, gotta admit I'm biased towards him the most, so it’s awesome to hear he’s growing on you too! (Especially since he got the highest CG count FJHSFFJGSJGFSJG)
Aww, thank you! I’m really glad to hear you enjoyed our game and took the time to leave a comment. We hope the full version meets your expectations too! ^^
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Hii I remember seeing somewhere in the comments that you would maybe add some voice acting as a stretch goal (or maybe I’m having false memories ☠️). I wonder if you have voice claims for the characters or just an idea about how they would sound like. It’s fun imaginating how voiceless characters may sound from their personality, designs etc
I can’t remember if I’ve mentioned adding VO in comments before, but just to clarify, I don’t think I’ll be including them. I had a negative experience with a VO director on my first project, which led to me handling everything on my own and caused a lot of stress T~T So, unless a team member really persuades me, I’m likely going to skip VO!
As for their voices (cue long rant)~
Shyloh: I imagine him with a deep yet mild voice. He speaks gently to Sev, but when addressing the other pixies, his tone shifts to a gritty growl, revealing his more aggressive side. There’s a hint of despair in his voice, as if he’s on the verge of fading away. Years of begging and praying have taken their toll on him.
Yulen: He’s the lighthearted jokester, so I picture him with an airy, loud tone (maybe even a hint of a drawl-like accent.) His exaggerated expressions and animated hand movements would make his voice really pop.
Helios: He’d have a formal tone, clearly enunciating his words since he never uses contractions (like saying "I am" instead of "I’m"). His voice would be mid-range but would drop deeper when he gets serious, adding an element of intimidation.
Merka: As the annoying brat of the group, he’d have a loud, shrill voice, always bubbling with frustration. His erratic body language matches his tone, and while he’s a master of camouflage and can mimic others, he intentionally refrains from doing so around fellow pixies to ensure he stands out.
Kai: He’d be the quietest, with a deep, melancholic voice that feels soothing, almost like a lullaby. His speech would be slow and calming (ideal for ASMR LOL), though sometimes his voice might get muffled under his veil, requiring listeners to strain to catch his words.
Adonis: He’d likely have an airy accent, contrasting with his rugged appearance. Years of smoking have affected his vocal cords after all. He uses a stern tone to assert his authority, but for added drama, he might lean in close and whisper “good [girl/boy/kid]” in your ear to gauge your reaction.
Rosario: He’d have a melodic accent, stretching his words to make them sound sweeter and more inviting. His sentences would have an ascending or cascading intonation, designed to capture attention and linger in memory. He’d coo softly, ensuring his voice resonates with those he speaks to.
That’s clearly how I see their voices (although in my head I can’t help but imagine Adonis’ vocal cords to be completely fried because of all this smoking. Literally coughing and wheezing every second ☠️ funny thoughts to get through all the violence)
Rosario’s voice would be rather high, mid or deep tho ?
I can't imagine Adonis coughing/wheezing (but that would be a hilarious twist XD) I'd like to imagine his voice having that rough edge, hinting at vocal cord damage, but it gives off a seasoned vibe instead of sounding sickly (hopefully that makes sense LOL.)
As for Rosario, he really has a gift for adjusting his voice to match the moment— not in a camouflage-like way as with Merka, but more about connecting with others and meeting their emotional needs because he wants to love and be loved. When he’s looking to inspire, that mid-high ascending melody is perfect for uplifting his listener. On the other hand, when he needs to be more critical, a descending tone from high-mid adds a nice touch of disappointment. And during flirtatious or NSFW moments, his sultry mid-deep voice brings a warm intimacy while still keeping that sweet melodic quality~~
Yess so Adonis is your average middle aged guy but with extra steps and a magic pipe
And as I expected, Rosario is the definition of a siren lmao. No wonder Merka, in the demo, really seemed to calm down from his usual tantrums every time Rosario got a little serious with him
Hiii is there a reason why all the pixies are smiling and closing their eyes except Merka who’s closing his mouth, Kai who’s opening his eyes and Rosario who’s closing his mouth ?
What’s the meaning and inspo behind the wings ?
And idk if I’m reaching here but is there some haft paykar inspo in the story ? I mean, it’s through a painting that we know about the pixies. They are seven, color coded, each represent different concepts and the protagonist’s meeting with them brings spiritual change. Lots of similarities
One of my favorite players is back, and I couldn’t be happier! <33
As for your first question, that’s a tough one! Depending on how the edits turn out, it could end up being a hidden gem that people discover later, or it might stay subtle and fly under the radar. It’s really up in the air ;;
Now, about the wings and their meanings: in general, they’re a symbol of each character’s freedom and their ability to act on their desires. But there are exceptions! For example, Shyloh’s wings are designed to look “weighed down,” showing the limitations and challenges that hold him back. This theme will be explored more during his route. Sev, on the other hand, doesn’t have wings at all, which is an even stronger statement. It represents a complete lack of freedom and makes her a symbol of feeling trapped. Each character’s wings tell their own story too~ For example, Yulen, the Hero of Wrath, has Goliathus Beetle wings to show his strength and resilience. There’s a unique winged creature behind each pixie’s wings, so it’s definitely something fun to look into if you’re interested!
Also, FJHSGJFGSJSGJ I GENUINLY CANNOT BELIEVE YOU GOT THE REF WITH HAFT PEYKAR. That's a scary level of attention to detail and research, I legit have goosebumps and I absolutely love it—even the team didn’t spot that one, so huge kudos to you Hehe!! It was an epic that inspired me during the drafting phase since, at that time, I was also researching the 7 stages of love from Sufi traditions, which inspired some of Nizami’s work (though, I eventually decided to go with the Eastern Monastic Tradition, the precursor to the Western concept of the seven deadly sins which includes the "Eight Thoughts," as outlined by Evagrius Ponticus and later discussed in the Philokalia.)
Fun fact (and do excuse me if I’ve mentioned this before lol): Sev’s name actually ties into one of the seven stages of love from Sufi tradition.
I am definitely excited to see what’s behind the meaning of the different pixies depiction. When I first played the demo it stuck out to me
I am not a winged creature expert but I’m still gonna do research about each pixies wings. There’s always new things that we must learn about. We hope Sev will learn to fly by themselve
About the Haft Paykar I am sadly not rlly knowledgeable about Persian literature, I’m more of an Arabic literature nerd. I didn’t pick up the reference right away. I was looking at Qajar era paintings and thought there would definitely be some pixies that could rock these fits and then suddenly the dots connected in my head and here came the associations with Haft Paykar ☠️ And I can assume that the pixies domains are like the princesses pavilions
That aside Im so glad I could find a game that uses other religions and mythologies than Christianity and Greco-roman mythologies. And since I’m also from the SWANA region I’m extra glad to see Islamic references and concepts from our region.
I had some doubts that you used the precursor of the seven sins instead of the recent version because of Kai. I think he’s a little far from the modern depictions of sloth and is closer to Acedia or melancholy. In fact I didn’t know there was 7 stages of love, I only know about the Arabic version who got more than 7 stages. To which stage Sev corresponds to ?
And since you scrapped the 7 stages of love concept for the pixie, which stage is attributed to which pixie ?
Exactly! I’ve played so many games rooted in Christian and Greco-Roman themes that they started feeling a bit repetitive after a while. But I get why developers stick to familiar territory; introducing too many new themes all at once can be overwhelming. That’s why I chose a mix of influences for the game. I grew up surrounded by religious ideas, though I’m not as connected to them now. This inspired me to blend a variety of elements—everything and nothing all at once—so that it stays rooted in the world of the painting while hinting at different aspects of various religions.
SWANA literature often doesn’t get the attention it deserves, especially in English translations, where much of the poetic beauty can be lost. That makes it harder to weave into mainstream media, but I’m hoping the pixies will help bridge that gap! XD
To answer your next question, here’s a bit of background: there are the 'Eight Thoughts' (which were precursors to St. Gregory the Great's seven deadly sins). They include 1. Avarice, 2. Gluttony, 3. Lust, 4. Sloth, 5. Despair, 6. Anger, 7. Vainglory, and 8. Pride. The traditional seven deadly sins are: 1. Lust, 2. Gluttony, 3. Greed, 4. Sloth, 5. Wrath, 6. Envy, and 7. Pride. You’ll notice that ‘Despair’ is the extra one here, which I wanted to tie to Sev—this is also known as ‘Naomidi,’ as Kai calls it.
According to the Catechism of the Catholic Church (1992), sloth is described as a “culpable lack of physical or spiritual effort,” which connects to Kais' future route (hence the confusion from the demo). Think of it this way: his melancholy is more of a symptom than the root cause.
As for the seven stages of love, we have: 1. Dilkashi (attraction), 2. Uns (attachment), 3. Ishq (love), 4. Akidat (trust/reverence), 5. Ibadat (worship), 6. Junoon (madness), and 7. Maut (death). Can you guess which one Sev represents? Hint: her name is the Turkish verb for one of these stages!
Annnnd for your final question, I actually never fully linked the stages to the characters since they were developed after the game’s philosophy was set. But it’s something fun to think about for when the game is released! (This reminds me of when a friend once asked me how I’d imagine the characters in an omegaverse world, I have an entire list + analysis for that FSHGFJHSGJFSH).
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Omgg I’m so excited for what you have in store for us. I’ll definitely also think about what stage corresponds to each pixie.
I just noticed something concerning Rosario again. In the bad ending 1, before sexually assaulting the mc his eyes glow pink. And the mc was very passive, didn’t even move an inch, didn’t even speak etc.
I wonder if it’s because either freezing is Sev’s trauma response or maybe Rosario have the power to paralyze them somehow ?
Aww, thank yoooou <33 I really hope it lives up to expectations! ^^
About Bad Ending 1 and Rosario, there’s actually a simple reason behind it. The eye glow is part of his 'yandere' expression (each pixie has their own unique one), hence the change before he did the deed. And as for your comment about the powers: each pixie only has a single power, so for Rosario, that’s shape-shifting (he can’t have everything, haha! XD).
For Sev's response, I felt the freezing fit the scene better since she lost the will to fight after half-blinding Adonis but still couldn’t get away. Also, in case anyone was self-inserting as the MC, the scene wouldn't get too uncomfortable (had they chosen to see the sexual scenes.)
Wait a secccc idk a thing about omegaverse but now I’m curious on how the characters would do in that type of setting (ofc ik you cant say a lot of things bc spoilers for the full release etc etc so just the surface level)
Soooo bascially, omegaverse (Alpha/Beta/Omega [ABO]) is a storytelling setting that's become super popular in mangas/manhwas lately. It features characters as omegas, betas, or alphas. There are also subcategories for the omega and alpha roles, like submissive and dominant, plus a "switch" option where characters can change their traits. My friend and I were chatting about an ABO visual novel that we both played, and that got me thinking about it, haha!
Now as to how they would do in the setting and which trait they'd have... that could be a major spoiler XD but I can safely say that Merka would definitely be a Beta! LOL
Heya Choco! So glad to hear you enjoyed our game <3
I can’t give you a specific date just yet since our script is still in the editing process, and I’m on the lookout for a new programmer since our previous one is no longer with the team. But the good news is that all our assets in the art and music departments are nearly complete!
Yea every time I play the demo there’s always some questions popping up. But this one is kinda trivial. What are the heights of the pixies ? (I need to prove to a friend that Merka is not shorter than me)
Of course, I'm always happy to answer questions from you Hehe ^^ From shortest to tallest, the order is:
Merka (Green) - 170 cm ~ 5.5 feet
Yulen (Red) - 178 cm ~ 5.8 feet
Adonis (Purple) - 181 cm ~ 5.9 feet
Rosario (Pink) / Helios (Yellow)- 183 cm ~ 6.0 feet
Kai (Blue) - 187 cm ~ 6.1 feet
Shyloh (Black/White) - 192 cm ~ 6.3 feet
The line (in the demo) about Sev being a similar height to Merka is a little hint for something coming up in his route! Fun fact: I was this close to making Shyloh even taller (can you tell I’m biased? XD), but his hair would’ve been flying out of frame like crazy, so I had to let that dream go T~T
Omg thank you. Good to know my frequent interventions are appreciated. Merka rlly gives short vibes (esp next to Rosario) and I thought he would be something like 165 cm. But then you say Sev and Merka being the same height is important to the story ? Im already scared ☠️☠️☠️
So a few more questions
Will there be more customizations (on behalf of the same friend with no itch.io account) ? If there is I would like to propose something like the darkest skintone already disponible but with a warmer undertone. And maybe also some plus sized options
How does Rosario’s genitals work ? Bc I cant help but imagine something like the caduceus with the two snakes coiling (Omgg medical reference)
Absolutely! I’m thrilled when people like you dive into the characters with such great questions—it honestly makes my day. You've definitely become one of my favorite commenters/players!
About Merka: the reason he might come across as shorter than his actual height has a lot to do with the dynamics around him. Yulen calls him "green runt," and since Merka and Rosario—one of the taller characters—are always together, that contrast really stands out (and maybe Yulen’s hiding his own height complex, given how much he loves boasting about being the strongest and fastest!). And then there’s Adonis, who keeps calling him a child—no wonder they're all testing his patience LOL Helios may just be the only one by his side...
On the customization front, it's a bit of a mixed bag. We initially planned for more options—like makeup, hairstyles, and additional eye and hair colors—but some of our artists have moved on to new projects. So, while I can’t make promises, I’ll definitely share your ideas with the team!
As for Rosario, this is going to count as a bit of a spoiler:
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Rosario has hemipenes! With two options, you can imagine how things might play out depending on the character’s sex choice from the initial customization. And who knows? Maybe there's been a hidden caduceus reference from the start, given that he’s the only character with an animal motif… ^^
Thank youu and yup, the characters are all worth diving into
Concerning Merka and Yulen, so their insecurities might be why (by what I see by the prologue and the individual tws) they are the most violent of the bunch physically. I mean they all are in their own way but Yulen is giving punches left and right and Merka is always spewing insults. They are definitely compensating for something
I’m sorry to hear that some of the staff have moved on and I hope the project is going smoothly for everyone
And about Rosario, I knew he had hemipenes but since the description in the bad ending mentionned them coiling then I was confuse whether they would be like, parallel or around each other. Since the caduceus reference is confirmed then ig they rlly are around each other.
Also concerning for the genitals option for the mc. Would there be like, hole preference for lack of better terms ? Like if we choose Sev to have female genitals can we choose to not do anal or something like that ?
Absolutely! Merka’s insecurities are a big part of his route, especially since his love theme centers on philia, and he’s the hero associated with envy. For example, you can see the 'hero' thematics play out in his interactions with Rosario, where they show off their wings. Additionally, his height complex can make him get pretty fussy + when others treat him like a brat—which fits right in with philia’s need for friendship or brotherly love.
Yulen, on the other hand, is much more direct. His love theme of mania drives him to pursue what he wants with an intense focus, which can make him a little extreme, especially as the hero of wrath. Unlike Shyloh’s clinginess, Yulen’s approach is about total commitment—mind, body, and soul. And when it comes to things beyond his control, like height, he might use others (like Merka) as a teasing point to feel just a touch superior/competitive. (Could the pixie's height hint at something deeper? Just a clue for you!)
Are they the most violent of all? Hmmm... I can think of two possible characters who maaaay be more intense but... that would be super spoiler territory LOL
On the production side, life can definitely throw a few unexpected twists our way, but we’re in good shape! Most art/music assets are ready, and now we’re focused on script edits and programming.
And for Rosario, as the hero of lust, his shapeshifting ability allows his anatomy to switch between coiling and standing parallel (hemipenes are still there XD). In the bad ending, we went with the coiling option to keep things simple. For those choosing female or intersex anatomy, there will also be a prompt during said NSFW scenes to select options like anal or vaginal, so players can tailor the experience!
Thank you so much for your kind comment (the profile name checks out as well <3) It means a lot to us to have you check out our submission and that you enjoyed our game ^^
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Yaaaaysies! I’m so honored to hear that, ruru-berry! I’m a bit of a lurker myself, so knowing this game made you want to comment means so much to me <3 We’re aiming for a 2025 release, and I really hope you’ll enjoy it when it’s out ^^
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Hello, Deniz! My name is Sonsoles, I'm an English to Spanish (Spain) translator. I love playing otome games and after playing Chromatic Agape's demo, I'm fascinated with its aesthetic, mechanics (I love that you can select TWs) and narrative. I'd really love to translate your game if that's something you're interested in!
There are two examples of my Itchio translations on my profile, but my contact email is sonsolesmendezalv@gmail.com, if you have any questions!
All these men are so pretty even my sweet little moth (My fav) but surrounded by all of them I just think of that meme of ralph on the bus from the Simpsons " I'm in danger" XD
Not to worry PorkBunny, you'll get your due revenge! Any fave pixies you wanna kill first? XD I feel like Helios and Merka on many players hitlist rn but I'm super curious~
If you could also take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much <3
Oh nooooo, Pee-Paw is going completely blind now FJHSFGSFJSGFJSGFS But Yulen would totally love that kind of challenge though, not gonna lie. He’d probably be like, 'I bet I can handle the pain way better than you, even if you're the one skinning me, lol.' XD
Heya there! So happy you're curious about their names ~ Time to drop some lore (and who doesn't love that for their characters? (≧◡≦) ♡)
The name "Merka" has a Turkic origin with some adjustments— It comes from the word "Merak," which means curiosity (something that pops up in his future route and was even hinted in the demo as to how he knew certain things about Sev) and desire (a little nod to his situationship with Rosario). It's also an anagram for 'Maker' (maybe related to his route... no spoilers though!)
As for "Yulen," he's actually an OC from a scrapped story idea (ah, the Wattpad era mafia stories XD). With a bit of tweaking, 'Yul' comes from 'Yulian,' which means youthful—hinting that he may or may not be the first one born in the painting (Adonis always loves to argue about that (¬‿¬). It also nods to the Turkic word "Yalan," which means lie, since Yulen insists he always tells the truth and nothing but the truth (or does he...?) I originally wanted to combine the two as 'Yul-lan,' but kept hearing 'Mulan' in my head for some reason, so I had to adjust it LOL
Bonus fun fact! I was actually considering naming him "Yalan," but I realized people might pronounce it as 'YAY-len' instead of 'YUH-lun,' so I scrapped that idea real quick XDD
ohh seems like I’ll have to know better about Turkic languages to have a better understanding of the game (totally understanding the bit about mispronouncing names esp from English speakers lmao it can be kinda annoying)
The main focus of the game is actually on Persian elements more than Turkic ones. I mostly used Turkic inspiration for naming things (like Sev, Merka, Yulen), but the lore itself—like the Ehsas and their subtypes—is more Persian-focused. A lot of those elements are also common in Urdu too. The love types are rooted in Greek mythology, so there's a lot going on! ^^ It was definitely a challenge to balance all of them, haha XD But don’t worry—you won’t miss out on any game content if you’re not familiar with these languages. They’re more like fun easter eggs or little hints!
Oh my goodness gracious, I can't wait for this to come out. I get the feeling that I'm going to be starved for more if I play it right now, but I'm definitely saving it for later!! The art is gorgeous, the character designs look great, and it's obvious that a lot of hard work has gone into this game so far :)
Since my dumbass finally found the individual tws, I’m kinda surprised at the lack of Helios TWS. Here I assumed he would be the worst ☠️. Ig sometimes my intuition is wrong, but then I was right in saying Shyloh and Kai are more red flaggy than what they want the player to believe
Oh my gosh, you’re making it really difficult for me not to spoil anything! I can offer a little hint to satisfy your curiosity though~ (I still don't know how to use the spoiler tag in Itch comment XD) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Are you sure you want to be spoiled? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . There's no going back... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Since these two were your favorite characters: Helios has eyes and ears everywhere—who knows, he might just drop in on another character’s route... as for Rosario, his flirty charm is quite the power when you consider how he can collect Ehsas from other pixies ^^
aaah I really love this. I am genuinely suprised that Helios' content warnings doesnt have gaslighting at high, he definitely feels like the kind of guy to be incredibly manipulative and gaslight you xD that post "confrontation" talk made me so angry at him, especially with how he treated Kai. I really like them all so far and want to see how they all play into their sin.
In the full game will the choices you make during the prologue influence whose route you end up on? I can already see that in each "path" you can side/interact with 1 of the heroes more than the other. It'd be pretty cool if it did influence the route you get.
Ahhh, I’m so glad you love how I grasp the pixie personas (✿◠‿◠) Depending on the editing process, the TW tags might get a little tweak, but the core of each route is solid since they were confirmed during the story outline and the art/music distribution. If you’re curious, I can share a tiny hint I wrote for another comment!
As for the prologue choice, yes! Every choice in the demo is meant to build points with the pixies. That’s why I didn’t include an option to leave with Shyloh—I really wanted players to build points with the pixies! Everything is being calculated~
I’m also planning to add a few illusionary choices in the full release since some players were really excited about that, even if they don’t directly affect the routes and only lead to dialogue variations. I initially left them out due to time constraints, but now that we have a bit more time, I’m excited to include them for everyone’s enjoyment ^^
Here's a little hint since I still haven't learned how to use Itch spoiler tags FJSHGFJSGFJFSG . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Are you sure you want to be spoiled? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . There's no going back... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Since you were really curious about Helios' TWs: He has eyes and ears everywhere—who knows, he might just drop in on another character’s route...
I totally feel you, marrnie! I can’t wait to release the full version too T~T I can’t give you a specific date just yet since it’s still in the editing process, and I’m on the lookout for a new programmer since our previous one is no longer with the team. But the good news is that all our assets in the art and music departments are nearly complete!
Merka would definitely appreciate your kind offer—he needs the arm to grow into a proper pixie!
Yaysiessss! I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed our game~ when the full release drops, we'll all be saying "goodbye everyone, I'll remember you all in therapy" (plankton voice, cause we have always have to side with the villains) XD
The demo was so peak I had to create an account just to leave my thoughts
First I rlly don’t think I’ve been that invested in an otome since like forever. I’m so serious, the plot is soo interesting there’s something out there that draws me in. First I think the mc is fairly likable and logical. Some say they might have the « dumb character syndrome » but most of the time they act fairly logically and also, medical school is a bitch and it definitely affected them to the deepest. May they be freed from the torment of medical school and their parents.
As for the pixies NONE OF THEM CAN BE TRUSTED ☠️ and that definitely includes Shyloh and Kai, just saying, they might act the kindest but they’re definitely extremely suspicious. Ofc all of this is said in a good way, love their personalities etc.
I knew the pixies would act like bitches (since the trigger warnings etc) but wow, I didn’t expect the switch up to be THAT sudden and brutal. Even tho even before we had some foreshadowing esp from Helios and Merka, it still caught me off guard. Like i expected lots of thing, but them to straight up JUMP the mc ? These pixies are TWISTED (esp Rosario and Helios I JUST HAVE A GUT FEELING ABT THESE TWO)
As for the art. The one who made the sprites is peak, the designs are also very distinctive and we can see how they communicate each characters personality. The OST ? Top tier. The backgrounds ? Top tier too.
I might have my favorites, personality and beauty speaking (Rosario and Helios) but I think I’ll try and do all the routes, for the fact that all the characters, from what I see in the demo, are interesting and I’m genuinely hooked to the story and lore. I fr cant wait for the full release of the game
The customization of the mc is very nice, and im glad there would be more options in the future. On the NSFW part, the fact the player can choose between if they want to sub or dom is a very nice addition that I didn’t rlly see in other games
For the TWs, I wonder if for the full release we would have TWS released for every individual route. Although I know for which pixie the stitching tag applies the most …
Closing thoughts: Don’t go to med school. Rosario is hot and sus. Does the pixies have « nationalities »? And if not what could they have been ? Cant wait for the full release
Oh my gosh, thank you so much for taking the time to write such a lovely and detailed comment! I’m absolutely thrilled you created an account just to share your thoughts—it truly means a lot and has genuinely made my week! (≧▽≦)
I did receive a few comments about Sev's character, but it’s heartwarming to see her persona resonate with some players! Med school definitely has its challenges... ensuing tragedy for Sev.
Also, your intuition is spot on—none of the pixies can be trusted! I aimed to make them as morally grey as possible, leaning towards darker themes in the demo while leaving room for redemption in the full release. I wanted to explore the good/evil dynamic, and I’m so glad that players like you have picked up on those hints, even for the characters who appeared good in the demo! (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄) I can’t thank the team enough for their incredible efforts; everyone did a fabulous job bringing the vision to life!
I’m also super glad you like the toggle options! I hope the NSFW position selection feature adds a fun twist! The individual TWs are available in the Extras menu, and there’ll be a popup asking if you’re sure you want to be spoiled, but it should be there! There might be a few tiny changes when the full release drops, depending on editing, but the main content is all set for now! (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ
As for your question about the pixies' nationalities, I haven’t picked any specific ones. I envisioned them as characters from a painting, so feel free to create your own headcanon! (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ
loved it ik there be horror but it still took me a back ik by the hints being easy 2 pick up on but omg the writting is great i was shocked even when expecting it
Heya Su! You must be quite the experienced reader to have picked up on those subtle hints, but I’m so glad it didn’t take away from your experience of the horror side of the game. Thank you for giving our game a try and for such a motivating comment. I hope you’ll enjoy the full release just as much (Kai will def appreciate it as well, hehe~)
i think its everything a demo should be hints u can grasp but still leaves mystery and great writing even when prepared nothing couldve prepared me for amazing writting excited too see full project when out and updates and joyus kai appreciates it (hes my fav)
Aww, that’s so kind of you to say Smile! Our composers did a fantastic job capturing the vibes of the story, so I’m really happy to hear you're enjoying the music after finishing the game. Thank you for playing, I hope you’ll love the full release tracks just as much! ^^
heyy, i cant seem to play the game everytime i install it it just doesnt start the game it just shows the files and the exe and if i click on the exe nothing happens. please help i really want to play the game:( im on pc btw
Hey Moxhie! Thanks for letting us know about the error you've been facing. I’ve uploaded new builds, so fingers crossed the issue is fixed now. Let me know if everything's working smoothly or if you're still running into any problems ^^
Curious to know about your thoughts after playing the game~
Yaaay! I’m so happy the plot twist caught you off guard, ginkgoleafly ^^ It can be such a 50/50 situation when writing these kinds of twists, so I’m thrilled to hear you enjoyed it. And knowing it’s one of your top games? Aww, that absolutely made my day! Thank you so much for playing and for leaving this wonderful comment—it really means a lot. I hope you stick around for the full release as well!
*Ignores the horror tag* surely nothing bad will happen and this will be a good christian otome. Seriously though, this demo was wonderful, keep up the good work.
We’re definitely sticking to the number one rule of a good Christian otome—nothing suspicious going on here, folks ;) The pixies are super sparkly for a reason, duh! Because sparkle = sugar, spice, and everything nice, of course. But seriously, thank you so much for playing our game, nekokitwolf! Comments like yours boost our team's motivation a hundredfold~ We’ll keep up the good work, and I hope you enjoy the full release just as much! ^^
omfg sooo much potential!! even just the prologue is so good, im hooked !!!
shyloh (do we get to know his name in-game yet, or did I just miss a scene?) is such a cutie!!! I will stay with him !!!!!! so excoted for future updates! :3
Hi hi, Maya! Yaaay, I’m so excited to hear you loved the demo~ You have no idea how happy that makes me—it’s like my morale level just skyrocketed, haha ^^ As for Shyloh, he doesn’t get named in the demo, but in the full release, you’ll have a super special moment where his name is revealed (since Shyloh means “gift from God”—pretty fitting, right?). Bonus tidbit, since he’s such a beloved character, he’ll definitely have more assets in the upcoming release ;)
no lie when I saw this I started to panic cry and scream out of joy how the hell did she make them sooo hot now I have to pick only one! Why did you do this to me!🥺🥺
OMGGG Daizyyy, I totally get what you mean! Every time I look at the pixies, I’m mesmerized by their hotness too T~T I’m simply counting down the days until the full release, where I can share their remaining artwork—AHHH! Seriously, thank you so much for giving our game a shot, and knowing that you loved it so much makes me incredibly happy! <3
Just played for the first time, and I am very impressed so far! The story is very interesting and all of the characters in the painting feel like characters I would have made up as a kid (twist included!!) so it felt incredibly cathartic to read and definitely got me invested. xD
I will say that I agree with RinRan below completely. The most frustrating thing for me while playing was Sev's naivety, which I can understand to a certain extent. You do a good job conveying how sheltered they were by their family so it makes sense that they don't know who to trust and aren't picking up on certain details in their interactions with the pixies. That being said, it's very frustrating as a player to not have a choice during what feels like a very pivotal moment (going with the heros or staying with the villain), especially when we get to make very minor choices leading up to that moment and then getting to make the same choice later on in what feels like a less meaningful moment. I agree with RinRan that an illusory choice would be ideal in this situation where the outcome is ultimately the same, but still leaves the player feeling in control of Sev and the story.
I'm so excited to see what else you have in store for us, particularly with Kai and Rosario. It feels like there's a lot to them lurking below the surface and I'm excited to learn more! Regardless, as long as best baby boy Shiloh is involved, I can't be disappointed~💕
I absolutely adore long comments like this, and I feel so grateful every time I receive them from players, so thank you for taking the time to write this, FluffyAlpaca! I’m glad to hear you connected with the cast and storyline! Maybe the pixies' powers are affecting the real world too—who knows? ;)
I totally understand where you’re coming from with RinRan's comment. Just so you know, we’ve decided to sprinkle in some illusionary choices to cater to the players' wishes. Ultimately, for Sev to see the other pixies’ true colors and gain points for their routes, she’ll need to go along with them. I’m also looking into ways to make the pixies seem less suspicious. If you have any thoughts on that, I’d love to hear your ideas!
For now, I’m super glad to hear that Kai, Rosario, and Shyloh are your characters of interest! They definitely have intense emotions regarding Sev, so we’ll have to wait and see how their stories unfold! ^^
Sorry for the late reply! I wanted to replay the game again so I could give the most accurate feedback possible, but my laptop broke. 🥲 Had to borrow my wife's Mac, RIP.
So, first off I have to say that I'm very impressed by how engaged you are with fans! I think it's a big deal when a creator hears some constructive feedback and actually wants to work to improve the areas that fans are struggling with while still maintaining the integrity of their creative vision. It speaks very well of your character and makes me even more excited to see this game completed; because I know that you and the team are working extra hard to make this game the best version of itself possible! Thank you~ I'm very glad to hear that you'll be implementing some illusory choices, and I can't wait to experience them firsthand!
As for ways to make the pixies seem less suspicious...the only suggestion I really have is to possibly make the pixies a bit less hostile towards Sev in the beginning. While I can see that that is simply their personalities (toned down even, yikes haha), the most red-flag aspect to me is how cruel they sometimes act in comparison to Shyloh; who (while definitely somewhat creepy) was always kind to Sev in their interactions. Some of the pixies (Helios and Merka in particular) were a bit too aggressive in the way they speak to Sev at times. This definitely makes sense in hindsight, but at the time had me shaking my head at Sev: 'Honey, why are you taking their verbal abuse when baby boy is right over there? 😔'.
However, I do want to emphasize that I don't think it's completely necessary to change the way they speak to Sev. I think adding the illusory choice to go with the pixies at the start will go a long way towards reducing the impact of the red flags they're initially giving off. On subsequent playthroughs, I was picking up on hints and dialogue that I was simply unable to in my first playthrough due to the fact that I was focusing so heavily on my frustration with the lack of a choice at what felt like a very pivotal scene. For example: in my first playthrough I found it very suspicious that the others weren't even slightly concerned with helping Helios when Shyloh grabbed him, but on my second playthrough, I realized that Helios literally explains why afterwards! I just wasn't paying attention the first time because I was hyperfocusing on my frustration. 🤦♀️
I hope this all makes sense; if there's anything you're confused by, please don't hesitate to ask me to elaborate! This ended up much more long and rambly than I intended, haha. Anyway, thanks for hearing me out! Each time I play this demo, I get more and more excited for the full release! I will definitely be playing every single route at least once, but Shyloh's will absolutely be getting played at least a dozen times, I'm calling it now 💖
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love this game sooo much, my fav will always be the Villain (he's the sweetest of all these crazy mfs) , and ngl the purple Dlif is kinda hot, this is such a well-written game! <33
though I have to ask, is there any way to achieve all of the endings? I've only done one playthrough for now and got the 'to be continued'
The MC got on my nerves though GOSH I JUST WANTED TO KNOCK SOME SENSE INTO THIS GIRL. But, again, I'd love to comment on how each character had its own different type of red flag, even though Kai is somehow trustworthy. (still sus) that golden guy was just straight-up CREEPY and the stitch scene made me afraid tbh. Love this game sooooo much and so excited for the full one! <<3 all the love pookie! <33
LOL I’ve definitely seen the Sev comments from a few players! I’m working on tweaking the demo a bit to make sure she’s not coming across as too... y'know, but it’s still a little sad to hear, aww.
That said, it really warms my heart to know the horror elements are still shining through, even with the hot yandere pixies taking the spotlight! I’m always checking myself while writing to make sure it’s still creepy enough.
And hey, be careful— Helios might just come around and gaslight you into thinking you’re in love with him! XD
Also, if you could take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much (^‿^v)
Heya Ghosty ^^ I’m so glad to hear you loved the game! Also, it’s awesome to see some Pew-Paw Adonis fans—he definitely deserves more love! XD As for the endings, there are currently only two available for the demo (Ending 1 & Ending 2). The “to be continued” part is for when we have the full release. The common route will pick up from there and continue until the route calculation point.
you should have a tut for all endings (love the game)
Hi there, sinnercinna~ I’m so happy to hear you loved the game!
Right now, the game is in its demo stage, so there are only two endings available (Ending 1 and Ending 2). Because of that, I think writing a separate tutorial for them might not be super helpful just yet. But don’t worry— once the full release is out, there will be plenty more endings to discover ^^
Also, if you could take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much (^‿^v)
Hii hehe this time I’m focusing on the ending 1.
details about ending 1
First of shout out to whoever did the ost for the ending 1. It’s my favorite of all the osts, it captures the oppressive atmosphere of the scene so well. It feels like being locked in a tiny room and being slowly suffocated by the heaviest incense/bukhoor ever.
In the cg for the scene, yk the one with Sev’s hand, we can see some sort of rainbow light and butterflies
Is it supposed to be some sort of symbolism or just for aesthetism ?
I think the lights and butterflies gives a dazed feeling to the pic. As if Sev is in some sort of surreal nightmare
Finally dropping by~
Ooo, in Ending 1, there are two tracks! The first one you hear at the start is called "The Edge of Reluctance" by Moximog, and the one near the end, right before the final lines, is "Unraveling Doom" by Bismii.
As for the hand, that’s actually Rosario’s hand, not Sev’s! And yes, the light and butterflies are packed with both symbolism/aesthetics. If you take a closer look, you’ll notice how it differs from the other hallucination CG— that might be a little clue for you!
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OMG REAL ? AND HERE I THOUGHT THIS ENTIRE TIME HE CAME ON THEIR HAND. Should have paid closer attention to the sleeve. My worldview is forever changed.Now for the lights and butterflies I’ll be honest this time I don’t have any outlandish explanation for the symbolism. Maybe Rosario’s uuh release got special properties. I mean, he said something or two about his shahvat. In the discussion with Merka and in the ending 1
Hi I need a little confirmation on Kai’s design. First I thought it was some sort of kimono/hanfu but then I saw there wasn’t a crossed collar.
But also his design makes me think of a (highly revisited) monk attire, mainly the belt tbh. So yea, what are the inspos behind Kai’s outfits I wanna see if I’m right
You're totes right Jasmine! Remember how last time you mentioned the lotus flower? Well, that's a key symbol in both Hinduism and Buddhism. The rest of his outfits also take a similar direction.
You can also see it in the open chest design since in both religions, the chest area is closely associated with the heart, which is symbolic of spiritual growth, compassion, and wisdom, also known as an embodiment of divine love and compassion (we also really wanted to showcase the tattoos LOL)
Our art director was the person who did his character design so a lot of thought went it it, hehe~~
So Kai really is the more spiritual-driven of the bunch, like the one who I think got the less connections to the material world. From the religious references(so from Christianity, Buddhism and Hinduism ?), to the way he acts so detached and passive, even his blue-ish skin tone.
And concerning his tattoos, I can also see insects? Idk, I’ve also seen that they’ll be important in his route … do they symbolize anything or is it mainly for the horror aspect ?
Kai’s skin tone plays a really significant role in his storyline. I’m super curious to hear what you think it might be! (It’ll help me see if the twist catches you off guard!) As for the insects… I can’t give too much away, but they’re both symbolic and a source of horror~ (and it's gonna be torture to program because of the on/off toggle for it T~T)
Lots of wild assumptions incoming :
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In my opinion he’s probably not totally alive. Like he’s not on the same level as the others.First, obviously the skin tone, that’s not the skin of an alive and breathing person with blood running in their veins.
Then, his demeanor. As I said he’s very not connected to the material world. His way of speaking himself in the 3rd person. Helios uses « one » mostly to, idk how to say it, makes his speech more formal and also emphasize his opinions. Kai uses the 3rd person as if he’s not really here.
Ofc, the numerous references to religion and especially what happens after death in said religions (lotus, reincarnation, Buddhism 🤔 am I connecting the dots)
Also, in the dialogue where our mc is getting mega jumped and she gets the choice to look pleadingly at a pixie (as if they’ll save her haha …). When picking Kai he says something like « I sense the funeral pyre drawing near ». I mean, the other pixies mostly said things like « nooo haha we will torture you some more » but Kai made a direct reference to death. Ok 🤔
And now, the insects. Who eats the bodies of our decomposing dead ? YOU GET IT. (Talking about eating the dead, are we getting eaten alive by centipedes in his route 👀?)
And I’m certain his veil also ties to the world of the dead etc. He makes me think of these depictions of spirits with translucent fabrics on them
Conclusion to me, Kai’s probably not totally alive. I mean just look at him
Haha, I love the theory you’ve got going! It’s going to be so much fun to save these and come back to them once the full release is out— seeing what you got right or wrong, hehe~~ Do you have any theories for the other characters too? I'd dying to hear them! <33
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happy crying jumping i can't believe i JUST found this masterpiece??? absolute 100/10! the writing, the art style, the story line, the characters MWAH ABSOLUTELY PERFECT. yandere visual novels are very much my thing and i always try to dig deeper in game sites and find anything revolving it. when i played this, i could feel the gaslighting vibes deep in my bone marrow and i was giggling kicking my feet the whole time because yes PLEASE hot fictional 2d men, manipulate me MORE (i'm mentally ill).
all of them are suspicious in their own way that it's just interesting. the "heroes", while hot, immediately felt unsettling to me because of how condescending they were towards shyloh. i was flaring because LEAVE HIM ALONE!!! HE'S JUST A SILLY LITTLE GUY!!! CAPABLE OF MURDER BUT HE DID NOTHING WRONG!!! and yes, shyloh is absolutely loco in the head BUT... his devotion... the yearning in his eyes... i love myself a TRUE YEARNER HE'S JUST LIKE ME FR! LITERALLY VIBRATING IN MY SEAT RN I NEED HIM. i was also lowk pissed off at helios for doing kai like that. i can assume kai did something horrible before but i helplessly have a soft spot for characters who treated the mc gently when no one else did </3 FUCK U HELIOS I DON'T LIKE YOU.
feeling like the characters' descriptions on this page don't even match how they act in-game, these mfs fooled us. except shyloh ofc my babygirl i'll keep you tucked away safely in my pocket where no one will hurt you ..
anyw i think i missed out on so many foreshadowing and hints for future content or backstory, so hoping i could play it over and notice them. UNFORTUNATELY, i can never bring myself to side with the "heroes". I'm so hooked on the little villain that there's no going back for me.....
SKY, YOU’RE KILLING ME WITH THE VIBES! (´▽`ʃƪ)♡ This entire response had me grinning ear to ear. Your energy is absolutely contagious! I love how into Shyloh you are— he totally deserves all that chaotic worship, and you’re giving him the perfect level of unhinged love.
And yes, we’re both on the same wavelength with wanting to protect him, but honestly? You’ve got to hurt him more for that even deeper, maniacal adoration to surface (since you know yandere tropes, you probs know what I mean). P.S. since I’m biased, Shyloh’s got extra CGs… hehe (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
Also, your comments about Helios? MAW GAWD. The Helios slander is chef’s kiss, and you’re going to have such a fun time with his plot twist in the full release. He might even become your second bias…who knows? LOL
But seriously, I’ve packed in so many hints for the demo version, and if you’re looking for some clues, there’s another player here, @jasmine flower, who’s analyzed a HUGE portion of the Easter eggs. You’ve gotta check out her comments too. Thank you so much for your amazing million-out-of-ten comment, seriously, made my day! ♡♡♡
OMG Im being mentionned hihi. Anyways it wont be hard to find the analysis of the other easter eggs since my yapping takes up a HUGE portion of the comment section lmaoo and I’m not done with it either
(Update, turns out I’m not the number one fan of chromatic agape ☠️ I only noticed NOW that Adonis had facial hair …)
Haha, Jasmine, you caught me! Now I'm feeling a bit shy FSJFGSJGSJFG But seriously, the motivation boost in your comments is A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! As for Adonis, he's been trying to grow a beard forever but just doesn’t have the needed Ehsas for it (since nothing new is coming in). Hopefully he's still Daddy enough XDD
Thank you smmm Im glad to know that my comments are motivating you.
So you’re telling me Adonis have been trying to grow a beard since forever but can’t ? That just gives me more fuel for Adonis slander YESSS (maybe he should try castor oil)
Haha, not the Adonis slander! XDDD Pee-paw's definitely got his work cut out for him if he’s trying to win you over ( ≖‿ ≖ ) No amount of castor oil could save the guy's failing beard, but he could def use a prosthetic eyeball LOL
Time to make fanarts
OMG, I’LL DIE HAPPY!!! <33
This has been my dream since making the game LOL
Please, please, please tag me on socials when you post it—I have to see and scream about it AHHHHHHHHH!
(Don’t forget to share it here too, I’m so hyped~~)
Hii, about the jumping,
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We see Kai seemingly “helping” (or is he ? Cant even tell. Cant trust no one) our protagonist with his veil in the presence of the other pixies that have nothing but bad intentions
Why didnt they intervene tho ? Did they not see him or is it completely deliberate (but then they also didnt intervene when Shyloh choked tf out of Helios or when Rosario just went at it in the ending 1)
So yea, did Helios deem Kai’s antics with Sev as not a big deal for his plan ? Or did they somehow all got distracted and didnt see Kai helping Sev ? Or maybe Kai himself didnt have good intentions too in the first place
You learned how to use the spoiler tag?! OMG, I still haven’t figured it out myself— you’ve got to teach me! Also, congrats, Jasmine~ I love the new name, by the way. <33
Okay, so I’ll try to avoid spoilers as much as possible, but here’s the gist: Kai did something in the past (back when he was the leader) that turned him into an outcast. Because of this, nobody really cares what he does as long as he stays out of their way. Oh, and unrelated side note: I tweaked his dialogue with Helios a bit to make Helios seem less suspicious to new readers. I felt like I was overemphasizing how much Helios looks down on Kai, so I toned it down a little.
Anyway, Kai is helping Sev because he wants something from her. (Spoiler alert— I can’t go into details yet!) For the first event, where the fake Shyloh (shapeshifted Rosario) attacks Sev, it’s actually part of their plan. They’re trying to make Sev believe it’s really Shyloh to give her a false impression of him.
As for the second event, that’s more Kai-driven. The veil he gives Sev helps reduce her pain (or maybe it’s just a placebo effect, like covering up a wound... who knows?) The other pixies don’t really care about this because, from their perspective, she’s going to die anyway, and they’ll get her pure life essence regardless.
Now, about Shyloh and Helios’s choking scene: Helios hadn’t given Shyloh the signal yet (he even explains this to Sev when she asks about it). The whole ploy was to paint Shyloh as the bad guy, and if the others intervened, it wouldn’t have had the same impact. Similarly, with Rosario, they didn’t care about her actions as long as the end goal—Sev’s death—was achieved.
Ultimately, Helios doesn’t think much of Kai because of something Kai did in the past. This event still affects him and his interactions with the others. Even Kai’s effort with the veil doesn’t change much in the end because Sev still dies. That’s kind of the theme with Kai’s arc; his good intentions don’t always change the outcome.
In terms of intentions, they’re split: in the first incident with the veil, he’s aligned with the pixies because he wants something from Sev (and no, it’s not Ehsas like the others want). In the second incident with the pixie's ending, his actions seem well-meaning, but whether or not he succeeds in getting what he wants is left ambiguous; it’s something tied to his route.
Hope that cleared things up a bit more! By the way, do you think the whole veil situation is a little confusing? If so, I could look into clarifying the demo text to make it easier to follow.
It was time to switch from the keyboard smash I had as an username to expressing my love for the best flower in the world.
And here’s a tutorial on spoiler tags by me, first you go on your page and to settings. On your profile settings you’ll cross yes to the « prefer markdown input where available » little square and it will activate HTML text So now here’s how to write the spoiler tags
(Leave a space when doing the summary line) so yes that’s it
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So to sum it up, the pixies are constantly in a IDGAF mood, nobody cares about Kai, he doesn’t have good intentions and his veil isn’t even guaranteed to really work. Sev is in the TRENCHES yea I would rather eat grass then be in her position.For the choking scene since it was explained I didn’t problems understanding, but also, if Sev haven’t done anything would he have given the signal ? Or is Helios willing to die for that? But then if he dies = no leader so he probably would have made the signal 2 seconds away from having his throat crushed.
Tbh Rosario is probably the worst actor alive, like, he’s supposed to imitate Shyloh but didn’t even bother to also get his personality right. That would be funny if the pixies basically told Rosario « yea to weird Sev out just act as your usual self ».
Don’t worry for the veil part, I think it’s explained well
Btw I thought that Sev would have just been locked up somewhere and be drained from their ehsas or something, yk, something like a farmer that milks his cow but instead of milk the pixies get ehsas. But wow they straight up planned to get Sev killed 😨 Ill think of good ways to slander each of the pixies plus survival plans because there’s no way we’re lasting more than three hours in the routes ☠️
And I forgot, the most important question of them all. Do I have the chance of beating any of the pixies in a fight ? Additional magic and brass knuckles not included of course. Like on a scale of 0 to 10 what’s the probability of beating any of the pixies in a fight
Yesss, jasmine flowers are sooo underrated! I totally missed an opportunity to add some flower symbolism to the game T~T Also, thanks a bunch for the spoiler tag explanation~ I’m gonna give it a try and hope it works—fingers crossed! UPDATE: IT WORKED YAAAAAAY <333
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Yep, the pixies really don’t care about anything except one thing: getting Sev’s life essence. Each of them has their own plans for it, tied to their personal motivations and sin arch-type. But here’s the catch— Sev’s emotions have made the essence all negative, so now they’re stuck trying to figure out how to deal with her. They could try being nice and shifting Sev’s perspective so her emotions aren’t so messed up, but naaaah— these pixies are too far gone themselves to bother.Kai totally brought this mess on himself with something shady he did back when he was a leader. (The twist is gonna blow your mind, hopefully XD) Sev’s situation is rough, like really rough, but don’t count out the grass strategy just yet, there’s still hope! And hey, worst-case scenario, she’s flambé FSHGJFSGFJGFJSDGDJ
About Rosario— so glad you think it’s clear! Someone I had as an editor (who bailed in less than a week, btw) wanted me to spell it out more, and I was doubting myself. Like, is it really not obvious? So hearing that it lands is such a relief! Especially since I’m done tweaking the demo and was so not ready to dive back into edits again XDDD
As for the “milking Sev” thing… uh, yeah, it’s technically on the table. It all depends on which pixie would be most motivated to go that route. Think about their personalities and goals— who would go for a method like caging her, overworking her, or making her their personal slave?
And don’t worry, I’ve got you covered. She half-blinded Adonis in the demo? So, yeeees, you’ll totally get to fight back. Curious to hear which pixies have the possibility of dying LOL
If you’re fighting the pixies without powers, it’s like… a hard 0% chance of winning. Some won’t fight you, so there’s that, I guess? >u< If you’ve got powers, your odds jump to about 3/10, and with some clever psychological manipulation, you can bump it to 5/10. But if they don’t have powers and you do? Now we’re talking— 5/10 chance, or even 7/10 if you’re playing it smart. So yeah, it’s not all doom and gloom… maybe…
(Phew had HTML problems …) Dont worry about the flower symbolism we already got Rosario, as beautiful, passionate and especially thorny as a red rose (his name means rosary in Spanish and Italian, how ironic knowing who he is …). And by the way, is Kai’s earring a lotus flower ? In some religions and cultures, the lotus symbolizes purity, detachment from the material world and rebirth. A hint maybe ?
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Sighs if only the pixies spent their time studying psychology and therapy instead of maximizing the art of evilness … it would be better not only for them but for Sev too.I’m already afraid about what Kai might have done like, wow, is it THAT BAD ?! What must he have done to get ostracized by the embodiments of evil themselves ? Also noticing the scars around his mouth … Punishment for what he have done maybe ?
We’re laughing about flambé-d Sev but then I see the cannibalism tag on Yulen’s route and yup, Sev kebab might become a real thing.
Also, concerning about whether things are clear or not in the demo I think they’re clear enough. And even so, personal opinion, if everything was 100% explicit and obvious then it would remove the pleasure of thinking, interpretation, pointing hidden things out, connecting the dots and conversation about said things. (And also if everything was laid out in the open then I wouldn’t find new things to say every time I play the demo)
… now if I go to the trigger warnings section, I’ll guess it’s the red haired leather fiend or his old one-eyed buddy. Sev really cant catch a break even out of medical school 😕 Realistically in a fight with no weapons ? Im getting turned into shish kebab by everyone. But in a fight using wits, weapons etc it’s true that Adonis got half blinded. His reflexes doesn’t seem great so just saying, he can kiss his other eye goodbye … And I could possibly take Yulen in a fight just because he’s the one who annoyed me the most, overcoming obstacles by pure pettiness. For anyone above 180cm except Adonis I wouldn’t even try. (Not the unsure « maybe » after the it’s not all doom and gloom ☠️ it’s so over for Sev)
Also how long is Rosario’s hair since the majority of it is hidden ? This is very important to me
Interesting fact, I actually considered writing down DID (Dissociative identity disorder) for Rosario in my earlier drafts! I’d planned for his dual personality to be called ‘Floreta’— one side would be super flirty, and the other would be really prudish, which would leave him conflicted about his emotions. But, I ended up scrapping the idea in the end LOL
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Also, oh ma gawwwwsh, you caught that with Kai! I don’t think there’s anything hidden from you anymore, haha XD You’ll also notice that the same flower design shows up on his tattoos. As for the meaning… well, I’ll leave that as a little mystery for now, but you’re definitely on the right track. As for what he’s done, it kind of depends on the person’s perspective. He made a choice that seemed like the most heroic option, but it ended up isolating him even more (feel free to take a guess!).Imagine if the pixies actually went to therapy, though! Helios would probably turn the tables and be like, “Why must one satisfy your curiosity?” Yulen would definitely flip the table. Merka would totally exaggerate his sob stories to win the pity party. Adonis would either praise or punish the therapist, depending on how they respond. Kai would stay silent, of course, and Rosario would try to seduce the therapist to get them to spill their secrets instead. As for Shyloh… well, that’s for you to theorize! ^^
I see you’re really rooting for the Sev kebab, huh, Jasmine? XDDD Adonis does have the disadvantage of being half-blind, but I’ve got an amazing horror CG saved up for him—you’re going to love it! <33 As for Yulen, you could definitely try reverse psychology with him. The more you resist, the more he’ll enjoy it. Just play dead, and you’ve got a shot. Another option is Helios— he doesn’t really like getting his hands dirty; he’s more of a delegator.
By the way, I’m super curious— how many times have you played the game by now? You keep finding new stuff every time, and I spent a solid 4 months actively working on hiding them all FJSGHFJSGHFJSGFJ
Oh! And about Rosario’s hair, I actually have a pic from his character design sheet. Let me check if I can share it with you~
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Hii I’m curious about the structure of the pixies « domains ». On one side Im imaginating the domains as equally beautiful, something straight out of the haft paykar. But also it’s kinda hard imaginating someone like Yulen have a beautiful domain with flowers everywhere. And also i wonder how is it inside, interior design says a lot about someone (already planning escape plans). And does Shyloh even got a domain ? Or is he just constantly on the run so he cant settle somewhereHiya Hehe, glad to read your comments once again! Do excuse the late reply, I usually try to respond to your questions as quick as I can but it's been quite the... emotionally straining week for VN development.
For the domains, they're all based on the character's personas/interests/archetypes/etc... Like you said, it wouldn't make sense to have Yulen running in a field of flowers XD However, it may have something to do with his tools (HINT: there are some clues in his duo dialogue with Adonis). Some of the pixies have interior-esque domains, while others are set on the outside, with one pixie having the best of both worlds (not gonna spoil who LOL)
As for Shyloh, I can't discriminate against the poor baby, he also has his own domain BUUUUUT... let's just say it's a tad different than the rest *eye stare emoji*
Also, I gotta ask, what kind of escape plans do you have in mind? Super curious~~
Hiii dont worry I know you’re working and all that take all the time you want
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I have an idea for who's having the best of both worlds (either Helios because he's the mighty leader or Rosario who seems very keen on aesthetics) My theory is that Shylohs domain is either hidden or he lives a nomadic lifestyleMy current escape plans involve Adonis or Yulen since I know they probably have weapons hidden somewhere. So, when one of them isnt looking, we steal a weapon and boom they’re finished
Ooo, those are some really interesting theories! Though I can’t spoil which one’s right or wrong FJGHSJFGJSGFJSG Also, I love that you're plotting escape plans already <33 gotta think about the "what next" part too. Even if you manage to break free, where do you go from there? Because that’s the real challenge.
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Well after that ... rely on the power of hope and prayers and eat grass to survive, or maybe threaten Shyloh until he sends us back idk Yup already plotting to escape, the chances of surviving (literally and figuratively) either of the pixies seem pretty low and thats ok because I love horror and creepyness the mostYou're the creator of the realm— you don’t have anyone to pray to! XD But I love the "eat grass" idea, so I’ll definitely add it to the script (fingers crossed the editor keeps it in, LOL). Honestly, Shyloh would probably just wreck the entire world of the painting rather than let you go. That guy’s a total psycho (I wonder who made him that way...)
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Merka "Haha, you think eating grass is gonna solve your problems?"
Sev "Yes."
Merka "Oh yeah? What’s next, hugging trees to fix your love life?"
Sev "Actually, the tree said to cut out toxic people. So… byeeee."
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ALSO i love how we're able to customize our character, not many visual novels have that, amazing work! :))
Aww, thank you so much, Ivy! Really appreciate the comment~ I'm such a big fan of character customization too, so I knew it had to be part of this project. And our sprite artist, Bobbert, absolutely outdid herself with all the amazing variations <3
Love love love ts game so much dude, shyloh is so cute bro
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Your comment has me so pumped Ivy, I love love love it~ Shyloh is my own bias so I gotta treat the baby well... is what I tell myself, but then he ends up getting traumatized over and over again LOL
Cute agresssion is reaaaal XD
when will the full game come out? :3
Hi Shanyuerin! I’m aiming for a 2025 release, though I don’t have a set date yet— it depends on how the editing and programming process goes.
Also, if you could take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much (^‿^v)
Question about the routes. How will we choose ? Means do we choose directly after the demo (like how a lot of otome games work) or do we have to make particular dialogue choices in the common route to then get the specific route we want ?
Hey there, Hehe~ To answer your question, you'll unlock a character's route based on the points you earn in the common route. I decided not to have the player select directly because I feel like it would take away from the impact of the earlier choices. Plus, it adds a bit of extra dramaaaaa! XD
Yeaa I could have guessed that you would go towards the unlocking route. Im happy about that, means I’ll have to do extra thinking when making choices. I’ll do every single route and maybe endings anyways soooo I saw that the game had winx club as inspiration and OMGG my worlds are colliding ☠️ that show was a whole part of my childhood Im so curious about how you’ll incorporate the references
Oh-ma-gawwwd, yeeees I love the idea of making the player work a little harder to get to know the characters— it makes each choice feel way more meaningful! One fun twist I’m planning is to have certain characters respond in unexpected ways— so if you pick what seems like the "nice" or "correct" option (like helping them or being friendly), it might actually lead to their bad ending. You’ll need to understand each character’s mindset to get the best results~~
As for the Winx inspiration— yes! That’s exactly where the whole fairy/pixie idea came from ^^ I feel like that show was such a big part of our childhoods. I even got the name 'Helios' from 'Helia' in the show, since he was one of my favorites (though his personality is totally different here, haha XDD). I had to separate them to keep things fresh!
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By certain characters I have a little feeling that a certain redheaded leather jacket wearer will definitely not mind at all if the player picks the mean options. But for the other characters yeaa ill have to work hard to determine which type of response they prefer (although I already have my ideas …) and that makes the whole game even better By the way, again for the routes, we got 2 bad endings and 1 good end. Will the full story progress only from the good ending or also the bad endings ? Idk if I worded it wellI'm staying quiet for now, but the redheaded leather jacket wearer does have a thing or two for when you resist him~ Just be careful not to push his buttons too much XD Also, I gotta admit, I’m not quite sure what you meant by the comment about the endings/story progression. Could you clarify?
On the same note, the endings for certain characters might change depending on how the editing goes! For example, one character could have 1 bad, 1 neutral, and 1 good ending, or maybe just 2 bad and 1 neutral— it's still a bit up in the air (cause some of them, based on their routes, don't deserve a good ending ngl). But hey, everyone’s guaranteed to have at least one bad ending LOL equality at its finest.
Hii! I really reallyy enjoyed the demo. Every aspect of it was intriguing and always kept me interested with twists^^ I played through it about five times? I was wondering how many endings there are currently to make sure I got them all. Goodluck on finishing it!!
Hi there Val! Thank you so much for playing the demo (five times, WOWOW!) and for sharing such kind words—it means a lot to hear you enjoyed it and were hooked by all the twists! ^^
Super curious to know which characters are your faves btw <33
Currently, there are two bad endings for Sev. There's also the end of the demo where Shyloh saves you (this one isn't a game ending, just the end of the demo).
Also, if you could take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much (^‿^v)
You're so welcome^^ so far Helios would have to be my fav I'm always a big fan of angelic looking characters!! Although Shyloh is growing on me also. Thanks for clearing it up for me:3 I will definitely rate it right now!
Oh wow, that was such a quick response—also thank you for the fabulous rating, Val! <33 I’m so happy to meet another Helios fan! Honestly, he’s such a beloved character for me too, so we reallyyyy went all out with his motifs (and the pompous way of speaking LOL) ^^ His route is one of my absolute favorites, so I hope you get to it as much as I do XD
As for Shyloh, gotta admit I'm biased towards him the most, so it’s awesome to hear he’s growing on you too! (Especially since he got the highest CG count FJHSFFJGSJGFSJG)
This is so interesting. Looking forward to the full release!
Aww, thank you! I’m really glad to hear you enjoyed our game and took the time to leave a comment. We hope the full version meets your expectations too! ^^
If you could also take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much <3
Hii I remember seeing somewhere in the comments that you would maybe add some voice acting as a stretch goal (or maybe I’m having false memories ☠️). I wonder if you have voice claims for the characters or just an idea about how they would sound like. It’s fun imaginating how voiceless characters may sound from their personality, designs etc
I can’t remember if I’ve mentioned adding VO in comments before, but just to clarify, I don’t think I’ll be including them. I had a negative experience with a VO director on my first project, which led to me handling everything on my own and caused a lot of stress T~T So, unless a team member really persuades me, I’m likely going to skip VO!
As for their voices (cue long rant)~
Shyloh: I imagine him with a deep yet mild voice. He speaks gently to Sev, but when addressing the other pixies, his tone shifts to a gritty growl, revealing his more aggressive side. There’s a hint of despair in his voice, as if he’s on the verge of fading away. Years of begging and praying have taken their toll on him.
Yulen: He’s the lighthearted jokester, so I picture him with an airy, loud tone (maybe even a hint of a drawl-like accent.) His exaggerated expressions and animated hand movements would make his voice really pop.
Helios: He’d have a formal tone, clearly enunciating his words since he never uses contractions (like saying "I am" instead of "I’m"). His voice would be mid-range but would drop deeper when he gets serious, adding an element of intimidation.
Merka: As the annoying brat of the group, he’d have a loud, shrill voice, always bubbling with frustration. His erratic body language matches his tone, and while he’s a master of camouflage and can mimic others, he intentionally refrains from doing so around fellow pixies to ensure he stands out.
Kai: He’d be the quietest, with a deep, melancholic voice that feels soothing, almost like a lullaby. His speech would be slow and calming (ideal for ASMR LOL), though sometimes his voice might get muffled under his veil, requiring listeners to strain to catch his words.
Adonis: He’d likely have an airy accent, contrasting with his rugged appearance. Years of smoking have affected his vocal cords after all. He uses a stern tone to assert his authority, but for added drama, he might lean in close and whisper “good [girl/boy/kid]” in your ear to gauge your reaction.
Rosario: He’d have a melodic accent, stretching his words to make them sound sweeter and more inviting. His sentences would have an ascending or cascading intonation, designed to capture attention and linger in memory. He’d coo softly, ensuring his voice resonates with those he speaks to.
That’s clearly how I see their voices (although in my head I can’t help but imagine Adonis’ vocal cords to be completely fried because of all this smoking. Literally coughing and wheezing every second ☠️ funny thoughts to get through all the violence) Rosario’s voice would be rather high, mid or deep tho ?
I can't imagine Adonis coughing/wheezing (but that would be a hilarious twist XD) I'd like to imagine his voice having that rough edge, hinting at vocal cord damage, but it gives off a seasoned vibe instead of sounding sickly (hopefully that makes sense LOL.)
As for Rosario, he really has a gift for adjusting his voice to match the moment— not in a camouflage-like way as with Merka, but more about connecting with others and meeting their emotional needs because he wants to love and be loved. When he’s looking to inspire, that mid-high ascending melody is perfect for uplifting his listener. On the other hand, when he needs to be more critical, a descending tone from high-mid adds a nice touch of disappointment. And during flirtatious or NSFW moments, his sultry mid-deep voice brings a warm intimacy while still keeping that sweet melodic quality~~
Yess so Adonis is your average middle aged guy but with extra steps and a magic pipe And as I expected, Rosario is the definition of a siren lmao. No wonder Merka, in the demo, really seemed to calm down from his usual tantrums every time Rosario got a little serious with him
Hiii is there a reason why all the pixies are smiling and closing their eyes except Merka who’s closing his mouth, Kai who’s opening his eyes and Rosario who’s closing his mouth ?
What’s the meaning and inspo behind the wings ?
And idk if I’m reaching here but is there some haft paykar inspo in the story ? I mean, it’s through a painting that we know about the pixies. They are seven, color coded, each represent different concepts and the protagonist’s meeting with them brings spiritual change. Lots of similarities
One of my favorite players is back, and I couldn’t be happier! <33
As for your first question, that’s a tough one! Depending on how the edits turn out, it could end up being a hidden gem that people discover later, or it might stay subtle and fly under the radar. It’s really up in the air ;;
Now, about the wings and their meanings: in general, they’re a symbol of each character’s freedom and their ability to act on their desires. But there are exceptions! For example, Shyloh’s wings are designed to look “weighed down,” showing the limitations and challenges that hold him back. This theme will be explored more during his route. Sev, on the other hand, doesn’t have wings at all, which is an even stronger statement. It represents a complete lack of freedom and makes her a symbol of feeling trapped.
Each character’s wings tell their own story too~ For example, Yulen, the Hero of Wrath, has Goliathus Beetle wings to show his strength and resilience. There’s a unique winged creature behind each pixie’s wings, so it’s definitely something fun to look into if you’re interested!
Also, FJHSGJFGSJSGJ I GENUINLY CANNOT BELIEVE YOU GOT THE REF WITH HAFT PEYKAR. That's a scary level of attention to detail and research, I legit have goosebumps and I absolutely love it—even the team didn’t spot that one, so huge kudos to you Hehe!! It was an epic that inspired me during the drafting phase since, at that time, I was also researching the 7 stages of love from Sufi traditions, which inspired some of Nizami’s work (though, I eventually decided to go with the Eastern Monastic Tradition, the precursor to the Western concept of the seven deadly sins which includes the "Eight Thoughts," as outlined by Evagrius Ponticus and later discussed in the Philokalia.)
Fun fact (and do excuse me if I’ve mentioned this before lol): Sev’s name actually ties into one of the seven stages of love from Sufi tradition.
I am definitely excited to see what’s behind the meaning of the different pixies depiction. When I first played the demo it stuck out to me
I am not a winged creature expert but I’m still gonna do research about each pixies wings. There’s always new things that we must learn about. We hope Sev will learn to fly by themselve
About the Haft Paykar I am sadly not rlly knowledgeable about Persian literature, I’m more of an Arabic literature nerd. I didn’t pick up the reference right away. I was looking at Qajar era paintings and thought there would definitely be some pixies that could rock these fits and then suddenly the dots connected in my head and here came the associations with Haft Paykar ☠️ And I can assume that the pixies domains are like the princesses pavilions
That aside Im so glad I could find a game that uses other religions and mythologies than Christianity and Greco-roman mythologies. And since I’m also from the SWANA region I’m extra glad to see Islamic references and concepts from our region.
I had some doubts that you used the precursor of the seven sins instead of the recent version because of Kai. I think he’s a little far from the modern depictions of sloth and is closer to Acedia or melancholy. In fact I didn’t know there was 7 stages of love, I only know about the Arabic version who got more than 7 stages. To which stage Sev corresponds to ?
And since you scrapped the 7 stages of love concept for the pixie, which stage is attributed to which pixie ?
Exactly! I’ve played so many games rooted in Christian and Greco-Roman themes that they started feeling a bit repetitive after a while. But I get why developers stick to familiar territory; introducing too many new themes all at once can be overwhelming. That’s why I chose a mix of influences for the game. I grew up surrounded by religious ideas, though I’m not as connected to them now. This inspired me to blend a variety of elements—everything and nothing all at once—so that it stays rooted in the world of the painting while hinting at different aspects of various religions.
SWANA literature often doesn’t get the attention it deserves, especially in English translations, where much of the poetic beauty can be lost. That makes it harder to weave into mainstream media, but I’m hoping the pixies will help bridge that gap! XD
To answer your next question, here’s a bit of background: there are the 'Eight Thoughts' (which were precursors to St. Gregory the Great's seven deadly sins). They include 1. Avarice, 2. Gluttony, 3. Lust, 4. Sloth, 5. Despair, 6. Anger, 7. Vainglory, and 8. Pride. The traditional seven deadly sins are: 1. Lust, 2. Gluttony, 3. Greed, 4. Sloth, 5. Wrath, 6. Envy, and 7. Pride. You’ll notice that ‘Despair’ is the extra one here, which I wanted to tie to Sev—this is also known as ‘Naomidi,’ as Kai calls it.
According to the Catechism of the Catholic Church (1992), sloth is described as a “culpable lack of physical or spiritual effort,” which connects to Kais' future route (hence the confusion from the demo). Think of it this way: his melancholy is more of a symptom than the root cause.
As for the seven stages of love, we have: 1. Dilkashi (attraction), 2. Uns (attachment), 3. Ishq (love), 4. Akidat (trust/reverence), 5. Ibadat (worship), 6. Junoon (madness), and 7. Maut (death). Can you guess which one Sev represents? Hint: her name is the Turkish verb for one of these stages!
Annnnd for your final question, I actually never fully linked the stages to the characters since they were developed after the game’s philosophy was set. But it’s something fun to think about for when the game is released! (This reminds me of when a friend once asked me how I’d imagine the characters in an omegaverse world, I have an entire list + analysis for that FSHGFJHSGJFSH).
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Omgg I’m so excited for what you have in store for us. I’ll definitely also think about what stage corresponds to each pixie.I just noticed something concerning Rosario again. In the bad ending 1, before sexually assaulting the mc his eyes glow pink. And the mc was very passive, didn’t even move an inch, didn’t even speak etc. I wonder if it’s because either freezing is Sev’s trauma response or maybe Rosario have the power to paralyze them somehow ?
Aww, thank yoooou <33 I really hope it lives up to expectations! ^^
About Bad Ending 1 and Rosario, there’s actually a simple reason behind it. The eye glow is part of his 'yandere' expression (each pixie has their own unique one), hence the change before he did the deed. And as for your comment about the powers: each pixie only has a single power, so for Rosario, that’s shape-shifting (he can’t have everything, haha! XD).
For Sev's response, I felt the freezing fit the scene better since she lost the will to fight after half-blinding Adonis but still couldn’t get away. Also, in case anyone was self-inserting as the MC, the scene wouldn't get too uncomfortable (had they chosen to see the sexual scenes.)
Wait a secccc idk a thing about omegaverse but now I’m curious on how the characters would do in that type of setting (ofc ik you cant say a lot of things bc spoilers for the full release etc etc so just the surface level)
Soooo bascially, omegaverse (Alpha/Beta/Omega [ABO]) is a storytelling setting that's become super popular in mangas/manhwas lately. It features characters as omegas, betas, or alphas. There are also subcategories for the omega and alpha roles, like submissive and dominant, plus a "switch" option where characters can change their traits. My friend and I were chatting about an ABO visual novel that we both played, and that got me thinking about it, haha!
Now as to how they would do in the setting and which trait they'd have... that could be a major spoiler XD but I can safely say that Merka would definitely be a Beta! LOL
I'm so hooked on this game! When is the full game release? 😭
Heya Choco! So glad to hear you enjoyed our game <3
I can’t give you a specific date just yet since our script is still in the editing process, and I’m on the lookout for a new programmer since our previous one is no longer with the team. But the good news is that all our assets in the art and music departments are nearly complete!
Fingers crossed, we can aim for 2025 ^^
Hey, that’s awesome to hear! I’m really looking forward to play the full release! Hope the search for a new programmer goes smoothly. ദ്ദി(ᵔᗜᵔ)
Yea every time I play the demo there’s always some questions popping up. But this one is kinda trivial. What are the heights of the pixies ? (I need to prove to a friend that Merka is not shorter than me)
Of course, I'm always happy to answer questions from you Hehe ^^
From shortest to tallest, the order is:
The line (in the demo) about Sev being a similar height to Merka is a little hint for something coming up in his route!
Fun fact: I was this close to making Shyloh even taller (can you tell I’m biased? XD), but his hair would’ve been flying out of frame like crazy, so I had to let that dream go T~T
Omg thank you. Good to know my frequent interventions are appreciated. Merka rlly gives short vibes (esp next to Rosario) and I thought he would be something like 165 cm. But then you say Sev and Merka being the same height is important to the story ? Im already scared ☠️☠️☠️
So a few more questions
Will there be more customizations (on behalf of the same friend with no itch.io account) ? If there is I would like to propose something like the darkest skintone already disponible but with a warmer undertone. And maybe also some plus sized options
How does Rosario’s genitals work ? Bc I cant help but imagine something like the caduceus with the two snakes coiling (Omgg medical reference)
Absolutely! I’m thrilled when people like you dive into the characters with such great questions—it honestly makes my day. You've definitely become one of my favorite commenters/players!
About Merka: the reason he might come across as shorter than his actual height has a lot to do with the dynamics around him. Yulen calls him "green runt," and since Merka and Rosario—one of the taller characters—are always together, that contrast really stands out (and maybe Yulen’s hiding his own height complex, given how much he loves boasting about being the strongest and fastest!). And then there’s Adonis, who keeps calling him a child—no wonder they're all testing his patience LOL
Helios may just be the only one by his side...
On the customization front, it's a bit of a mixed bag. We initially planned for more options—like makeup, hairstyles, and additional eye and hair colors—but some of our artists have moved on to new projects. So, while I can’t make promises, I’ll definitely share your ideas with the team!
As for Rosario, this is going to count as a bit of a spoiler:
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Rosario has hemipenes! With two options, you can imagine how things might play out depending on the character’s sex choice from the initial customization. And who knows? Maybe there's been a hidden caduceus reference from the start, given that he’s the only character with an animal motif… ^^
Thank youu and yup, the characters are all worth diving into
Concerning Merka and Yulen, so their insecurities might be why (by what I see by the prologue and the individual tws) they are the most violent of the bunch physically. I mean they all are in their own way but Yulen is giving punches left and right and Merka is always spewing insults. They are definitely compensating for something
I’m sorry to hear that some of the staff have moved on and I hope the project is going smoothly for everyone
And about Rosario, I knew he had hemipenes but since the description in the bad ending mentionned them coiling then I was confuse whether they would be like, parallel or around each other. Since the caduceus reference is confirmed then ig they rlly are around each other.
Also concerning for the genitals option for the mc. Would there be like, hole preference for lack of better terms ? Like if we choose Sev to have female genitals can we choose to not do anal or something like that ?
Absolutely! Merka’s insecurities are a big part of his route, especially since his love theme centers on philia, and he’s the hero associated with envy. For example, you can see the 'hero' thematics play out in his interactions with Rosario, where they show off their wings. Additionally, his height complex can make him get pretty fussy + when others treat him like a brat—which fits right in with philia’s need for friendship or brotherly love.
Yulen, on the other hand, is much more direct. His love theme of mania drives him to pursue what he wants with an intense focus, which can make him a little extreme, especially as the hero of wrath. Unlike Shyloh’s clinginess, Yulen’s approach is about total commitment—mind, body, and soul. And when it comes to things beyond his control, like height, he might use others (like Merka) as a teasing point to feel just a touch superior/competitive. (Could the pixie's height hint at something deeper? Just a clue for you!)
Are they the most violent of all? Hmmm... I can think of two possible characters who maaaay be more intense but... that would be super spoiler territory LOL
On the production side, life can definitely throw a few unexpected twists our way, but we’re in good shape! Most art/music assets are ready, and now we’re focused on script edits and programming.
And for Rosario, as the hero of lust, his shapeshifting ability allows his anatomy to switch between coiling and standing parallel (hemipenes are still there XD). In the bad ending, we went with the coiling option to keep things simple. For those choosing female or intersex anatomy, there will also be a prompt during said NSFW scenes to select options like anal or vaginal, so players can tailor the experience!
I'm so happy I decided to check the 2024 Otome Jam submissions, this game is so beautiful and so interesting!
Thank you so much for your kind comment (the profile name checks out as well <3) It means a lot to us to have you check out our submission and that you enjoyed our game ^^
If you could also take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much!
normally i do not write comments but i really enjoyed your demo. hopefully it comes out soon
Yaaaaysies! I’m so honored to hear that, ruru-berry! I’m a bit of a lurker myself, so knowing this game made you want to comment means so much to me <3 We’re aiming for a 2025 release, and I really hope you’ll enjoy it when it’s out ^^
If you could also take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much!
Hello, Deniz! My name is Sonsoles, I'm an English to Spanish (Spain) translator. I love playing otome games and after playing Chromatic Agape's demo, I'm fascinated with its aesthetic, mechanics (I love that you can select TWs) and narrative. I'd really love to translate your game if that's something you're interested in!
There are two examples of my Itchio translations on my profile, but my contact email is sonsolesmendezalv@gmail.com, if you have any questions!
All these men are so pretty even my sweet little moth (My fav) but surrounded by all of them I just think of that meme of ralph on the bus from the Simpsons " I'm in danger" XD
I want REVENGE!
Not to worry PorkBunny, you'll get your due revenge! Any fave pixies you wanna kill first? XD I feel like Helios and Merka on many players hitlist rn but I'm super curious~
If you could also take a moment to rate our game, it would really help us with visibility on the itch algorithm. We’d appreciate it so much <3
No problem, Yulen and Adonis thought we could have been friends but they did me dirty now it's time to skin Yulen alive and take out Adonis other eye.
Oh nooooo, Pee-Paw is going completely blind now FJHSFGSFJSGFJSGFS
But Yulen would totally love that kind of challenge though, not gonna lie. He’d probably be like, 'I bet I can handle the pain way better than you, even if you're the one skinning me, lol.' XD
Quick question, where does the name Merka comes from ? Yulen too
Heya there! So happy you're curious about their names ~ Time to drop some lore (and who doesn't love that for their characters? (≧◡≦) ♡)
The name "Merka" has a Turkic origin with some adjustments— It comes from the word "Merak," which means curiosity (something that pops up in his future route and was even hinted in the demo as to how he knew certain things about Sev) and desire (a little nod to his situationship with Rosario). It's also an anagram for 'Maker' (maybe related to his route... no spoilers though!)
As for "Yulen," he's actually an OC from a scrapped story idea (ah, the Wattpad era mafia stories XD). With a bit of tweaking, 'Yul' comes from 'Yulian,' which means youthful—hinting that he may or may not be the first one born in the painting (Adonis always loves to argue about that (¬‿¬). It also nods to the Turkic word "Yalan," which means lie, since Yulen insists he always tells the truth and nothing but the truth (or does he...?) I originally wanted to combine the two as 'Yul-lan,' but kept hearing 'Mulan' in my head for some reason, so I had to adjust it LOL
Bonus fun fact! I was actually considering naming him "Yalan," but I realized people might pronounce it as 'YAY-len' instead of 'YUH-lun,' so I scrapped that idea real quick XDD
knk türk müsün <:o)
ohh seems like I’ll have to know better about Turkic languages to have a better understanding of the game (totally understanding the bit about mispronouncing names esp from English speakers lmao it can be kinda annoying)
The main focus of the game is actually on Persian elements more than Turkic ones. I mostly used Turkic inspiration for naming things (like Sev, Merka, Yulen), but the lore itself—like the Ehsas and their subtypes—is more Persian-focused. A lot of those elements are also common in Urdu too. The love types are rooted in Greek mythology, so there's a lot going on! ^^ It was definitely a challenge to balance all of them, haha XD But don’t worry—you won’t miss out on any game content if you’re not familiar with these languages. They’re more like fun easter eggs or little hints!
Oh my goodness gracious, I can't wait for this to come out. I get the feeling that I'm going to be starved for more if I play it right now, but I'm definitely saving it for later!! The art is gorgeous, the character designs look great, and it's obvious that a lot of hard work has gone into this game so far :)
I AM SAT DOWN SIR. I'M KEEPING AN EYE ON THIS ONE. ADONIS??? HELLO??? ZADDY??? HE SURE IS SHAPED LIKE AN ADONIS GOOD LORD I'M LICKING THE SCREEN
Since my dumbass finally found the individual tws, I’m kinda surprised at the lack of Helios TWS. Here I assumed he would be the worst ☠️. Ig sometimes my intuition is wrong, but then I was right in saying Shyloh and Kai are more red flaggy than what they want the player to believe
Oh my gosh, you’re making it really difficult for me not to spoil anything! I can offer a little hint to satisfy your curiosity though~ (I still don't know how to use the spoiler tag in Itch comment XD)
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Since these two were your favorite characters:
Helios has eyes and ears everywhere—who knows, he might just drop in on another character’s route... as for Rosario, his flirty charm is quite the power when you consider how he can collect Ehsas from other pixies ^^
aaah I really love this. I am genuinely suprised that Helios' content warnings doesnt have gaslighting at high, he definitely feels like the kind of guy to be incredibly manipulative and gaslight you xD that post "confrontation" talk made me so angry at him, especially with how he treated Kai. I really like them all so far and want to see how they all play into their sin.
In the full game will the choices you make during the prologue influence whose route you end up on? I can already see that in each "path" you can side/interact with 1 of the heroes more than the other. It'd be pretty cool if it did influence the route you get.
Ahhh, I’m so glad you love how I grasp the pixie personas (✿◠‿◠) Depending on the editing process, the TW tags might get a little tweak, but the core of each route is solid since they were confirmed during the story outline and the art/music distribution. If you’re curious, I can share a tiny hint I wrote for another comment!
As for the prologue choice, yes! Every choice in the demo is meant to build points with the pixies. That’s why I didn’t include an option to leave with Shyloh—I really wanted players to build points with the pixies! Everything is being calculated~
I’m also planning to add a few illusionary choices in the full release since some players were really excited about that, even if they don’t directly affect the routes and only lead to dialogue variations. I initially left them out due to time constraints, but now that we have a bit more time, I’m excited to include them for everyone’s enjoyment ^^
Here's a little hint since I still haven't learned how to use Itch spoiler tags FJSHGFJSGFJFSG
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Since you were really curious about Helios' TWs:
He has eyes and ears everywhere—who knows, he might just drop in on another character’s route...
complete version when :"(( (i'll give you an arm and a leg (not mine) to finish it I NEED IT SO BAD ITS CRAZY)
I totally feel you, marrnie! I can’t wait to release the full version too T~T I can’t give you a specific date just yet since it’s still in the editing process, and I’m on the lookout for a new programmer since our previous one is no longer with the team. But the good news is that all our assets in the art and music departments are nearly complete!
Merka would definitely appreciate your kind offer—he needs the arm to grow into a proper pixie!
Please, can i have some more. Yelling I need it (spongebob voice)
Yaysiessss! I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed our game~ when the full release drops, we'll all be saying "goodbye everyone, I'll remember you all in therapy" (plankton voice, cause we have always have to side with the villains) XD
The demo was so peak I had to create an account just to leave my thoughts
First I rlly don’t think I’ve been that invested in an otome since like forever. I’m so serious, the plot is soo interesting there’s something out there that draws me in. First I think the mc is fairly likable and logical. Some say they might have the « dumb character syndrome » but most of the time they act fairly logically and also, medical school is a bitch and it definitely affected them to the deepest. May they be freed from the torment of medical school and their parents.
As for the pixies NONE OF THEM CAN BE TRUSTED ☠️ and that definitely includes Shyloh and Kai, just saying, they might act the kindest but they’re definitely extremely suspicious. Ofc all of this is said in a good way, love their personalities etc.
I knew the pixies would act like bitches (since the trigger warnings etc) but wow, I didn’t expect the switch up to be THAT sudden and brutal. Even tho even before we had some foreshadowing esp from Helios and Merka, it still caught me off guard. Like i expected lots of thing, but them to straight up JUMP the mc ? These pixies are TWISTED (esp Rosario and Helios I JUST HAVE A GUT FEELING ABT THESE TWO)
As for the art. The one who made the sprites is peak, the designs are also very distinctive and we can see how they communicate each characters personality. The OST ? Top tier. The backgrounds ? Top tier too.
I might have my favorites, personality and beauty speaking (Rosario and Helios) but I think I’ll try and do all the routes, for the fact that all the characters, from what I see in the demo, are interesting and I’m genuinely hooked to the story and lore. I fr cant wait for the full release of the game
The customization of the mc is very nice, and im glad there would be more options in the future. On the NSFW part, the fact the player can choose between if they want to sub or dom is a very nice addition that I didn’t rlly see in other games
For the TWs, I wonder if for the full release we would have TWS released for every individual route. Although I know for which pixie the stitching tag applies the most …
Closing thoughts: Don’t go to med school. Rosario is hot and sus. Does the pixies have « nationalities »? And if not what could they have been ? Cant wait for the full release
just realized there’s literally individual route tws ☠️☠️☠️
Ahh, I'm so sorry for taking so long to reply! I hope you have a blast exploring them <3
Oh my gosh, thank you so much for taking the time to write such a lovely and detailed comment! I’m absolutely thrilled you created an account just to share your thoughts—it truly means a lot and has genuinely made my week! (≧▽≦)
I did receive a few comments about Sev's character, but it’s heartwarming to see her persona resonate with some players! Med school definitely has its challenges...
ensuing tragedy for Sev.Also, your intuition is spot on—none of the pixies can be trusted! I aimed to make them as morally grey as possible, leaning towards darker themes in the demo while leaving room for redemption in the full release. I wanted to explore the good/evil dynamic, and I’m so glad that players like you have picked up on those hints, even for the characters who appeared good in the demo! (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄) I can’t thank the team enough for their incredible efforts; everyone did a fabulous job bringing the vision to life!
I’m also super glad you like the toggle options! I hope the NSFW position selection feature adds a fun twist! The individual TWs are available in the Extras menu, and there’ll be a popup asking if you’re sure you want to be spoiled, but it should be there! There might be a few tiny changes when the full release drops, depending on editing, but the main content is all set for now! (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ
As for your question about the pixies' nationalities, I haven’t picked any specific ones. I envisioned them as characters from a painting, so feel free to create your own headcanon! (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ
i can tell that game is going to leave an impact on me ☠️ cant wait for the full release
OMG, the pressure is on XD
"every1 a red flag" leave kai out of this
loved it ik there be horror but it still took me a back ik by the hints being easy 2 pick up on but omg the writting is great i was shocked even when expecting it
Heya Su! You must be quite the experienced reader to have picked up on those subtle hints, but I’m so glad it didn’t take away from your experience of the horror side of the game. Thank you for giving our game a try and for such a motivating comment. I hope you’ll enjoy the full release just as much (Kai will def appreciate it as well, hehe~)
i think its everything a demo should be hints u can grasp but still leaves mystery and great writing even when prepared nothing couldve prepared me for amazing writting excited too see full project when out and updates and joyus kai appreciates it (hes my fav)
kept the game in the background after i finished just for the music
its so so so good
Aww, that’s so kind of you to say Smile! Our composers did a fantastic job capturing the vibes of the story, so I’m really happy to hear you're enjoying the music after finishing the game. Thank you for playing, I hope you’ll love the full release tracks just as much! ^^
heyy, i cant seem to play the game everytime i install it it just doesnt start the game it just shows the files and the exe and if i click on the exe nothing happens. please help i really want to play the game:( im on pc btw
Hey Moxhie! Thanks for letting us know about the error you've been facing. I’ve uploaded new builds, so fingers crossed the issue is fixed now. Let me know if everything's working smoothly or if you're still running into any problems ^^
Curious to know about your thoughts after playing the game~
Yaaay! I’m so happy the plot twist caught you off guard, ginkgoleafly ^^ It can be such a 50/50 situation when writing these kinds of twists, so I’m thrilled to hear you enjoyed it. And knowing it’s one of your top games? Aww, that absolutely made my day! Thank you so much for playing and for leaving this wonderful comment—it really means a lot. I hope you stick around for the full release as well!
*Ignores the horror tag* surely nothing bad will happen and this will be a good christian otome. Seriously though, this demo was wonderful, keep up the good work.
We’re definitely sticking to the number one rule of a good Christian otome—nothing suspicious going on here, folks ;) The pixies are super sparkly for a reason, duh! Because sparkle = sugar, spice, and everything nice, of course. But seriously, thank you so much for playing our game, nekokitwolf! Comments like yours boost our team's motivation a hundredfold~ We’ll keep up the good work, and I hope you enjoy the full release just as much! ^^
omfg sooo much potential!! even just the prologue is so good, im hooked !!!
shyloh (do we get to know his name in-game yet, or did I just miss a scene?) is such a cutie!!! I will stay with him !!!!!! so excoted for future updates! :3
Hi hi, Maya! Yaaay, I’m so excited to hear you loved the demo~ You have no idea how happy that makes me—it’s like my morale level just skyrocketed, haha ^^ As for Shyloh, he doesn’t get named in the demo, but in the full release, you’ll have a super special moment where his name is revealed (since Shyloh means “gift from God”—pretty fitting, right?). Bonus tidbit, since he’s such a beloved character, he’ll definitely have more assets in the upcoming release ;)
this game is amazing. thnank you so much
Thank you so much for playing our game and for leaving this lovely comment, urnotjoon! Your support truly means the world to us <3
no lie when I saw this I started to panic cry and scream out of joy how the hell did she make them sooo hot now I have to pick only one! Why did you do this to me!🥺🥺
OMGGG Daizyyy, I totally get what you mean! Every time I look at the pixies, I’m mesmerized by their hotness too T~T I’m simply counting down the days until the full release, where I can share their remaining artwork—AHHH! Seriously, thank you so much for giving our game a shot, and knowing that you loved it so much makes me incredibly happy! <3
Just played for the first time, and I am very impressed so far! The story is very interesting and all of the characters in the painting feel like characters I would have made up as a kid (twist included!!) so it felt incredibly cathartic to read and definitely got me invested. xD
I will say that I agree with RinRan below completely. The most frustrating thing for me while playing was Sev's naivety, which I can understand to a certain extent. You do a good job conveying how sheltered they were by their family so it makes sense that they don't know who to trust and aren't picking up on certain details in their interactions with the pixies. That being said, it's very frustrating as a player to not have a choice during what feels like a very pivotal moment (going with the heros or staying with the villain), especially when we get to make very minor choices leading up to that moment and then getting to make the same choice later on in what feels like a less meaningful moment. I agree with RinRan that an illusory choice would be ideal in this situation where the outcome is ultimately the same, but still leaves the player feeling in control of Sev and the story.
I'm so excited to see what else you have in store for us, particularly with Kai and Rosario. It feels like there's a lot to them lurking below the surface and I'm excited to learn more! Regardless, as long as best baby boy Shiloh is involved, I can't be disappointed~💕
I absolutely adore long comments like this, and I feel so grateful every time I receive them from players, so thank you for taking the time to write this, FluffyAlpaca! I’m glad to hear you connected with the cast and storyline! Maybe the pixies' powers are affecting the real world too—who knows? ;)
I totally understand where you’re coming from with RinRan's comment. Just so you know, we’ve decided to sprinkle in some illusionary choices to cater to the players' wishes. Ultimately, for Sev to see the other pixies’ true colors and gain points for their routes, she’ll need to go along with them. I’m also looking into ways to make the pixies seem less suspicious. If you have any thoughts on that, I’d love to hear your ideas!
For now, I’m super glad to hear that Kai, Rosario, and Shyloh are your characters of interest! They definitely have intense emotions regarding Sev, so we’ll have to wait and see how their stories unfold! ^^
Sorry for the late reply! I wanted to replay the game again so I could give the most accurate feedback possible, but my laptop broke. 🥲 Had to borrow my wife's Mac, RIP.
So, first off I have to say that I'm very impressed by how engaged you are with fans! I think it's a big deal when a creator hears some constructive feedback and actually wants to work to improve the areas that fans are struggling with while still maintaining the integrity of their creative vision. It speaks very well of your character and makes me even more excited to see this game completed; because I know that you and the team are working extra hard to make this game the best version of itself possible! Thank you~ I'm very glad to hear that you'll be implementing some illusory choices, and I can't wait to experience them firsthand!
As for ways to make the pixies seem less suspicious...the only suggestion I really have is to possibly make the pixies a bit less hostile towards Sev in the beginning. While I can see that that is simply their personalities (toned down even, yikes haha), the most red-flag aspect to me is how cruel they sometimes act in comparison to Shyloh; who (while definitely somewhat creepy) was always kind to Sev in their interactions. Some of the pixies (Helios and Merka in particular) were a bit too aggressive in the way they speak to Sev at times. This definitely makes sense in hindsight, but at the time had me shaking my head at Sev: 'Honey, why are you taking their verbal abuse when baby boy is right over there? 😔'.
However, I do want to emphasize that I don't think it's completely necessary to change the way they speak to Sev. I think adding the illusory choice to go with the pixies at the start will go a long way towards reducing the impact of the red flags they're initially giving off. On subsequent playthroughs, I was picking up on hints and dialogue that I was simply unable to in my first playthrough due to the fact that I was focusing so heavily on my frustration with the lack of a choice at what felt like a very pivotal scene. For example: in my first playthrough I found it very suspicious that the others weren't even slightly concerned with helping Helios when Shyloh grabbed him, but on my second playthrough, I realized that Helios literally explains why afterwards! I just wasn't paying attention the first time because I was hyperfocusing on my frustration. 🤦♀️
I hope this all makes sense; if there's anything you're confused by, please don't hesitate to ask me to elaborate! This ended up much more long and rambly than I intended, haha. Anyway, thanks for hearing me out! Each time I play this demo, I get more and more excited for the full release! I will definitely be playing every single route at least once, but Shyloh's will absolutely be getting played at least a dozen times, I'm calling it now 💖